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Confetti Bullets Impression

A wedding celebration Vows were solemnly spoken Then a voice hissed in her ear Spinning her world upside down Confetti fell like bullets Exploding around her head Vacant were sad hazel eyes Sorrow numbed her wintry heart October 19th , 2020 Impressions Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud View 3

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/25/2020 8:51:00 PM

Good interpretation on the visual Jenna... Congrats on your win.. ~ Ani

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/20/2020 10:42:00 AM

What a devastating thing to happen to a bride on her big day, but it happens in real life too. Must check out the pic. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2020 5:07:00 AM

I hope you did see the visual, Tom. It really makes sense of my lines. Thanks for leaving me your kind comments.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/20/2020 9:10:00 AM

Well written and good take on the contest! Good luck on number one Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2020 5:06:00 AM

It's a bit bizarre to me, but then so was the photo, althought beautifully colored. Thank you, Mark.

John Watt

Date: 10/20/2020 12:09:00 AM

What a horrible day to have your world fall apart. I love how you describe the result but not the details, Jenna. There is much room for ambiguity in poetry to allow the reader to fill in the spaces, and you do it so well. Such powerful writing.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/20/2020 12:24:00 AM

The photo that served as incentive for the write would help to convey the scene, but I cannot post it. Sorry. Thank you for your thoughtful comments, John.