Confession

she stood in silence- in question, I rambled free did she feel my love ? If not my fleshly desire could she find my words of truth..? for, my bag of tricks a gift spill from thy spirit hope is all I need ! for within my song of praise her love, she giveth away... ______________________________ Contest ~ "Bag Of Tricks" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 10:42:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your 2nd place win in the contest of Linda.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 4:13:00 AM

hey Rick, congrats on your win, David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2011 4:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 2:34:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 2:33:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 2:06:00 PM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda,Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your success in my contest luv and thankxxx for your support .. lovely words...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 12:11:00 PM

A most interesting one in the contest,Rick. Very unique! Congrats on your win,my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/20/2011 6:37:00 PM

Rick, any woman could feel your love. It eminates in all of your poetry -- your kind heart and desire to make everyone feel comfortable. I don't know what this contest is about, but I do know a great poem (and a great friend) when I see one. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2011 11:40:00 AM

Thanks for the alert on my contest. Corrections made and thanks again. Rick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 5:44:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece ^Rick. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 7:01:00 PM

Lovely unique tale with a bag of tricks, Rick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 4:35:00 PM

Interesting one.Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara