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Concussed

There was a loopy boxer named Lars Who was continually seeing stars. He saw them day and night In and out of a fight. And declared he won a match on Mars.

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/14/2016 10:43:00 PM

And rightly so, since I consider boxing a barbaric sport. / M

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/4/2016 11:51:00 PM

A very clever Limerick Paul. I have never been able to come up with even one! I wish you a very happy New Year. Sorry about the late reply but 6 of my family from California visited us for 8 days and I haven't been online at all. Blessings, Connie

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/7/2016 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Christmas is wonderful, but sometimes I wonder how we get through it. Thanks for the kind words. I hope 2016 showers you with blessings. xxxhugs

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/3/2016 7:55:00 PM

Beautiful words my friend , glad I've stopped by to read it...Well I wish you a happy new year full of passion, happiness and joy for u and for yr beloved one's....hugs / / :) dalia

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/4/2016 2:03:00 PM

Dalia, your kind words give me the strength to again face a blank computer screen. Please know of my gratitude.

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 12:04:00 PM

PAUL, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/1/2016 6:10:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT A. I very much appreciate your kind comment. Blue skies--I hope they dominate your life in 2016.

Paul Schneiter

Date: 12/31/2015 5:02:00 PM

You're a sweetheart, Catie. Thank you for the kind comment. 2016: May it bring you nothing but the sweetest of blessings.