Conception

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My open (organic) style

strong sounds fear in depths tell it softly in my ear persuade with words emote aloud one by one from your lips imagination liberated to wonder thoughts spring forth from meditative moments drift as leaves upon the wind curling swirling random by chance arrive &thrive

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/21/2021 6:27:00 AM

The leaves random by chance, arrive and thrive…such an interesting ponder. <3

Brian Strand
Date: 8/21/2021 8:59:00 AM

Cheers Kim

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2021 5:17:00 AM

What a fantastic poem, Brian; sometimes, a single word is more powerful than a whole phrase. Your language flows so quickly and has a calming effect, I wish I could create a similar poem, but I believe that's more for professional poets and creative people like yourself: blessings and kindest regards.

Brian Strand
Date: 8/16/2021 6:04:00 AM

Not sure about that Lasaad,its a case of finding one' s usp style.My open (organic) form took me a few years to arrive at this,so stay creative Thnks