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Thanks to Francis Grasso, I think my neighbor bird has been identified. He told me the name was orange-bellied barn swallow, and this indeed seems to be it!!

 

Comrades of the Sky

Some orange- bellied birds, fork-tailed and dark shiny-winged, have made their home on or near the rooftop of our house. Swiftly, smoothly wheeling and careening, bird-whooping to each other; freely, happily they glide. . . comrades of the sky. July 24, 2016 For the Etheree Contest of Kim Merryman Note: If anyone knows what kind of bird this might be, could you let me know? I have gone online to find out and can't seem to figure it out!
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Arnone Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Comrades of each other, or comrades of human kind?
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, Hugs Eve
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Oriole maybe! Congratulations on this beautiful poem.....
Merryman Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in my contest! I loved the visual of these colorful birds flying together as "comrades" and "bird-whooping to each other". Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 3:01 PM
What a wonderful ethereee - oh Andrea I would so love to see this bird for real:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Misra Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Your poem speaks of the joy of freedom, of comradeship. Reminds me of the bonding between airforce pilots on ground and in the air. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. ~karam~
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations on this beauty Andrea! I didn't read it, so you must have entered it kind of late. Gorgeous bird to inspire you. 7 ; )
Wigley Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:57 PM
...told you this would do wellerer, Andrea,congratulations! Viv x
Waldrop Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Hey beautiful summation of the bird in the photo. But I also like how you shaped the paragraph as a pyramid.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win with this loving poem. Glad you identify this bird, we have one alike here but without the forked tail. They are very familiar. :) Sunita
La France Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Andrea, beautiful, congratulations, I think this bird is an American Robin, if you check google, it looks the same, but maybe it is a swallow ~
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Nice imagery in your Etheree, Andrea. Congrats on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Nice visuals. congratulations!
Y. Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Hi Andrea, I loved the picture you painted with words. Congrats on your winning write .It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Scars Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Andrea, back with my congrats on your placement! Well done lady :)-luloo
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful birds in a beautiful poem.
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 3:10 PM
The birds in this family are beautiful in flight..We have them here but not exactly the same species..I enjoy watching them in flight in the early morning when they catch bugs while flying across the pasture..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Sara
Anish Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Lovely photo! Did you take it? I am a long time member of the NWF. Your poem is triangular. Now the presidential race goes into full swing. It is starting to drive me nuts! Someone will be our new leader. I wonder who? I like birds - did you ever watch the Life of Birds on PBS. It was excellent! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Yvonne Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Love it, love you a fav.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:46 AM
What an impressive and appealing writing it is dear, Andrea! A seven for the Comrades of the sky!
Neumann Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Comrades of the sky. Great write and good luck in the contest Orange is a good chakra...
Deb Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 1:14 AM
sounds great !
Wigley Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Lovely, Andrea, and hugely descriptive. Will do more wellerer than a large orange clockwork driven rubber well thing. Viv x
Quigley Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Colorful and energetic. Great write!
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 1:41 PM
- I'm not a bird expert ... but sounds special - Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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