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Today I sat at my computer,
                                              
it looked back at me as my tutor.
                                       
I did not know what to say,
                                                
the computer said lets play.
                                              
I replied what is your game,
                                              
just write about my name.
 
Date Written:9/4/2021
 
Bite Size Poem no.20 Poetry Contest
 
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 9/7/2021 6:23:00 AM
I believe the devil invented computers to get me personally. Computers don't really like me at all so I don't ask much of mine. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/7/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Computers, love them when they work and hate them when they don't. Have a blessed day..........
Date: 9/6/2021 9:18:00 AM
Just think, if we did not have computers we would not be on Poetry Soup..Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for your note. You are so right, no computers, no Poetry Soup. Oh no, that would be a crime. We would miss wonderful writes and friendships. Have a blessed day..........................
Date: 9/6/2021 8:02:00 AM
This is so elegant a write. Very clever poem that deserves a win for you Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 9:30:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your vote for a win. Glad you like my fun computer write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 9/6/2021 7:07:00 AM
This is really cute, Paula:) Reminds me of when I got my first computer and I taught myself how to use it! Despite the many errors, we are still on friendly terms :) Regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you are still on friendly terms. Computers can drive one crazy. Have a blessed day..........
Date: 9/5/2021 4:12:00 PM
Paula, this is definitely , delightful. Panagiota
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day..........
Date: 9/5/2021 11:51:00 AM
My browser frequently reports it can not access a site and asks if I want to play a game. What kind of mindset thinks playing a game is an excuse for not working?
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Good Point. I say, it is a love hate relationship. Love them when they work and hate then when they don't. Have a blessed day..........

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