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slower then her adagio i follow her rhythm and then begin to resurrect not forgetting that this requiem is not hers but perhaps mine so before me lays naked a blank page but not table rosa she's not a blank slate that i'm some kind of ubermind but yet so sublime passively shooshing off Nietzsche if he was true then shouldn't he be stronger yet he's dead so in turn i turned to myself and said let this proper fifth chord go back to... here we are again with a composition of her and him yet seems i lost herself in the chor us

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Date: 10/20/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/20/2023 7:42:00 AM
Beata. Perhaps you should read my submission titled "Beata Agustin"...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/20/2023 7:38:00 AM
Fuck you, and fuck off

Book: Shattered Sighs