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Composing

Cemeteries as themes
    Certainty of  s a d  words
Crypts, tombs and vaults for sure
  Creaking gates  s q u e a k  and groan
Captive of the long dead
      Caressing ghosts that love
C O M E  into my abyss . . . 

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August 23, 2016


Poetry/Pleisades/Verse/Composing
Copyright Protected, ID 16- 822-565-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Pleisades C
sponsor, Kim Merryman

Fifth Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2016

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Paul Callus Date: 8/26/2016 2:03:00 PM Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Constance. Well done! // paul Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/26/2016 12:25:00 PM Constance, do you really compose poems in cemeteries? I've always been fascinated with reading the headstones. Congrats on your win with your ghostly Pleiades! Blessings! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2016 4:16:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, B.W. :) - hugs and :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/26/2016 1:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Constance:) Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 8/26/2016 12:37:00 AM A slight chill passes through me as I type my congrats, Constance. Viv x Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 9:50:00 PM Congratulations on your win Constance! 7 ; ) Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/25/2016 7:32:00 PM Sad and dark, but so well said, Broken Wings. congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2016 7:15:00 PM I really loved yours, dear!! Congrats. Now time to start D's!!! Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2016 5:20:00 PM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement...this poem was one of my favorites...:)-luloo Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2016 5:06:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/25/2016 10:13:00 AM You compose in your favourite environment, Constance! A captivating Pleiades with an equally captivating ending. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 8/24/2016 11:04:00 AM This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/23/2016 3:58:00 PM thanks for the win in your teaers contest. love this, my friend x Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/23/2016 3:49:00 PM wow, what a marvelous way you did this form. I am jealous!! what oh what will I do. Just another lame one that scores less than a three. haha!! You are so good with these. Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 8/23/2016 11:07:00 AM More like "Decomposing" Lol This is a great Halloween poem too, Constance. I love this dark write. Good luck! Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 8/23/2016 9:05:00 AM Oooh I love it :) Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/23/2016 8:45:00 AM I'm with Jan on this one, it is typically you, has your signature style, which is so easily recognizable, and that's a good thing, should do well in contest. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/23/2016 5:21:00 AM Perfect for your writing style Constance...If I was judging blind I would have known this was written by you :-) I agree with TJ - a great last line good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/23/2016 3:01:00 AM Excellent verse. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply