Constance La France Poet Verse

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Composing

Cemeteries as themes
    Certainty of  s a d  words
Crypts, tombs and vaults for sure
  Creaking gates  s q u e a k  and groan
Captive of the long dead
      Caressing ghosts that love
C O M E  into my abyss . . . 

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August 23, 2016


Poetry/Pleisades/Verse/Composing
Copyright Protected, ID 16- 822-565-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Pleisades C
sponsor, Kim Merryman

Fifth Place

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Paul Callus August 26, 2016 at 2:03 PM Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Constance. Well done! // paul

Kim Merryman August 26, 2016 at 12:25 PM Constance, do you really compose poems in cemeteries? I've always been fascinated with reading the headstones. Congrats on your win with your ghostly Pleiades! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 4:16 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, B.W. :) - hugs and :)

Joanna Daniel August 26, 2016 at 1:36 AM Congratulations on your win, Constance:)

Viv Wigley August 26, 2016 at 12:37 AM A slight chill passes through me as I type my congrats, Constance. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2016 at 9:50 PM Congratulations on your win Constance! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight August 25, 2016 at 7:32 PM Sad and dark, but so well said, Broken Wings. congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2016 at 7:15 PM I really loved yours, dear!! Congrats. Now time to start D's!!!

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2016 at 5:20 PM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement...this poem was one of my favorites...:)-luloo

Jan Allison August 25, 2016 at 5:06 PM Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus August 25, 2016 at 10:13 AM You compose in your favourite environment, Constance! A captivating Pleiades with an equally captivating ending. Regards // paul

Funom Makama August 24, 2016 at 11:04 AM This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.

Jack Horne August 23, 2016 at 3:58 PM thanks for the win in your teaers contest. love this, my friend x

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2016 at 3:49 PM wow, what a marvelous way you did this form. I am jealous!! what oh what will I do. Just another lame one that scores less than a three. haha!! You are so good with these.

Daniel Turner August 23, 2016 at 11:07 AM More like "Decomposing" Lol This is a great Halloween poem too, Constance. I love this dark write. Good luck!

Casarah Nance August 23, 2016 at 9:05 AM Oooh I love it :)

John Hamilton August 23, 2016 at 8:45 AM I'm with Jan on this one, it is typically you, has your signature style, which is so easily recognizable, and that's a good thing, should do well in contest.

Jan Allison August 23, 2016 at 5:21 AM Perfect for your writing style Constance...If I was judging blind I would have known this was written by you :-) I agree with TJ - a great last line good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam August 23, 2016 at 3:01 AM Excellent verse. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.