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Inspired by the ending of a relationship the "true colors" of that relationship allowed me to be complete.

I finally got to see You weren't in love with me At least not anymore When I walked for the door Your heart already tied With his and so you lied As I fell from former glory You "consoled" me with your story Couldn't see then, now I know How easily you let go You said one thing, did another Not the actions of a lover And though I am quite clever Didn't put all that together Responsible for mis-formation Of your true communication I stood hard and fought for you For the things you said you'd do Did whatever I could see To stand for your family Took a while to unfold For your true story to be told Said you'd be the best parent you can Yet you're a child not a man Put yourself before your son How an earth can that be done? If that were me I couldn't rest And yet I guess you've done your best I've been angry now too long And even though you don't belong Faithfully supporting you I bought your lies and followed through Your true colors have shone bright Revealing you in shameless light And I know I couldn't be With Mr No Integrity Don't say this to make you wrong Since I've known you now quite long And the way your life has tracked Quite oblivious to the impact I feel only true compassion For you to live in such a fashion The constant need to duck and dive And live in such a web of lies For all the time we've known I forgive and I have grown And now I live completely free You have no power over me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/8/2016 5:08:00 PM
A break-up can be very painful (I've been there). Glad that you managed to get out of the frustrations of this thing we call love, as far as relationships are concerned. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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