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We have come from every district In the whole of our large state. We hold a big convention, Every year around this date. We greet each other cheerfully, I’ve been friends with some for years, Then turn back to our creations as Completion deadline nears. We know what the judges hope to find, They come from our own ranks. They look for beauty and harmony. Their only pay is thanks. We’ve memorized the scale of points On which entries will be judged. Each judge knows the rules by heart And will notice if we’ve fudged. I stand back from my exhibit And sincerely make a try To see not as a mother views her child, But with honest judge’s eye. I carefully adjust another line Before it is time to depart. The judges are impatient for Their judging rounds to start. I wander to another room Where judging is all done. I find to my amazement that My chamaecypais nookatensis has won. It has taken the arboreal award. That is a nice surprise. But it is in the other room Where result of my labor lies. We try to cheer each other As we stay to hear our fate. The judging books are closing. We will not have long to wait. I spy from far across the way, Red ribbon lying there. My flower arrangement’s taken second, Which to first cannot compare. I hide my disappointment And hold back a falling tear. And vow to win the big one In the Flower Show next year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/26/2012 4:43:00 PM
a wonderful poem and a well-deserved win! congratulations!
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:35:00 AM
Joyce, i would love ta SEE WHAT A FLOWER SHOW IS all about... no need to be disappointed... bet the flowers you bloom get prettier every year.. judging is just a random thought... anywhere... i think we only see what we want..... had lots of fun reading your poem. Have a beautiful and lovely day~LUV*PD
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:54:00 PM
Joyce what a cutie of a poem you have here. I hope you win as well!
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Date: 3/22/2012 8:16:00 AM
Joyce...the same care you grow these prize-winning flowers is the same care you write your prize winning poery with!! You have a green thumb and a GREEN PEN!!! Congrats to your winnning creationS! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:45:00 AM
Well you are certainly a first rate person BIH HUGS Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 3/21/2012 1:14:00 PM
It seems you are a winner in many contests of many venues, dear Joyce!! Hooray for you!!
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Date: 3/21/2012 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place. Good poem, well desreved.
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Date: 3/21/2012 10:05:00 AM
poignant write, joyce.. special congrats on your top win; so heartfelt!...:)huggs
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:01:00 AM
Beautifully written....congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/21/2012 7:50:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your big win, loved it, well done..David
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Date: 3/21/2012 6:01:00 AM
Really enjoyed this! Congrats on a well deserved 1st place win....Liz
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Date: 3/21/2012 2:08:00 AM
Wow a magnificent win Joyce well done i am sure you will win next year xx
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Date: 3/20/2012 10:59:00 PM
Joyce, your 'COMPETION' won 1st place. Congrats! ---Leila^_^
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:59:00 PM
Hey there,Joyce. I had not seen this one before! gosh, I think second AND a first place are spectacular. YOu must be doing something really right!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:59:00 PM
Alot of surprises in life Joyce - some good and some not so good.Enjoy yours poem Joyce...always. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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