Compassions Goal

It is impossible to please........................................................................EVERYONE
like a Queen bee fat and almost legless trying to hold together her world she...DOES
not see for she can not move freely and her mind does................................NOT
focus on the abundant need of each to....................................................HAVE
for the many need sustenance................................................................TO
thrive, feeling the plight of.....................................................................LIKE
beings whose each task, small or large, deserve the same respect as do.........YOU
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:27:00 PM
Kool words Deborah, but maybe we all should care. Many congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations Deb. On your poems success in Carol's competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and special honor for u to so enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations Deb on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2010 9:23:00 AM
Interesting write. I teach the kids I work with the need to respect others and that they deserve the same respect from others. This one deserves a feature on more than just on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:14:00 PM
Deb, this one is very very wise. You did awesome here! Is this the one you entered in the contest, becuase I think i've seen more than one line poem. You GOTTA do well in that contest, you just have to! by the way, is my Joy that Sweetly STays actually a free verse?Wow, how come I can do it but only sometimes??
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:15:00 PM
So true of a poem, we all have a task large or small...Raul
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Date: 2/17/2010 6:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments on my poetry, very much appreciated. I like this end line poetry form. Keep your pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:01:00 PM
Nice message and a very true statement portraying the truth of life. Your poems are always unique in nature. Wonderful. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on my poem. Hope you have not seen the Glory of Nation the last but one. Best wishes and love Ravindra..........Deborah Guzzi
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:47:00 PM
Truth in this statement but for many personalities it is painful. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:34:00 AM
What a true statement.... I am referring to the end line.... Most dislike my brutal honesty, which is why haters spark grand inspiration.... AWESOME poetry today my friend.....:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:06:00 AM
Hi Deborah, You have correctly formatted this "End Line Word" poem. I hope you have or will enter my contest. The response has been wonderful. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love to you. Dane
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:37:00 AM
Great message in this clever write and a lot of truth in it thanks Daniel
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