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Compassion

Giving a sandwhich, For you to eat, whispers touch Across a cold night Inspired by Raul's contest

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Jenna Bird

Date: 3/18/2010 1:05:00 PM

very beautiful; i've read some of your pieces and i really admire how you can say so much with so little words;) and thanks alot for the comments;)

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/13/2010 3:37:00 AM

Giving seems like an art lost these days , well said Doris

Linda Milgate

Date: 3/12/2010 5:51:00 PM

Hi there thank you for your kind comments. I really liked this. Said so much and gave such feeling in a few words. Senryu? Good luck.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2010 3:52:00 PM

Charity personified Doris in your Senryu... a good time of year to reflect on this too..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2010 1:33:00 PM

Nice senryu, Doris! Good luck in Raul's contest. He has so many of them, I'm having a hard time keeping track of which one you're writing for here. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/12/2010 12:46:00 PM

Helping others feels so good. Nice senryu, Doris.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 10:35:00 AM

Hmm, I wonder what contest this is? this is really good, Doris. I hope you make the winner's circle with it. LUv, Andrea

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/12/2010 7:49:00 AM

VERY NICE GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST FALESHIA

Skyy Allen

Date: 3/12/2010 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback Doris. I appreciate your kind words. Your poem Compassion is a touching testament, it resonates with me. Take care & keep the pen a flowin :)