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Commonsensical Nonsense

Evanescent parlays

of paradoxical exposure

expecting perceivable combustion,

hindsight still plays unavoidable heady games

aftermath perception lives up to mean arithmetic


Specificity of angular slants contrasting circles'
spatial commitment to conformity's configurations - -

square pegs will never fit societal a$$holes

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2016 3:33:00 PM

ha ha ha very clever and that last line is superb and so darn funny Paloma:-) hugs jan xx

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:40:00 PM

We have to keep our sense of humor around those with spatially challenged awareness! Much thanks Jan. :)

White Wolf

Date: 11/22/2016 6:02:00 AM

Haha, thanks, I got a real kick out of this one. You haven't lost your pizzazz.

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Rick, love that word pizzazz! :)

Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/21/2016 7:24:00 AM

It was a head rush but you threw us a lifeline, gee thanks! I agree its off the page. Please stand for the next election. Paloma for President! You have my vote.

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:37:00 PM

Oh my Lord, NO, who'd want that responsibility, after a good cuppa coffee, I sometimes do dream of world domination! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2016 3:13:00 AM

Wow! I love the power in your words Paloma! 7 ; )

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:36:00 PM

Much appreciated Connie! :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/18/2016 4:59:00 PM

I'm with everyone else, that last line just killed it. Only you my friend, only you. The entire poem is off the charts or should I say, this is a gas!!!! I'm still laughing as I type this. Your style just always rips it, I am blown away every time I stop by for a visit.

Paloma P
Date: 11/18/2016 5:04:00 PM

I wasn't sure anyone would get it, but figured that last line would clinch it. :) Much thanks Chris, I guess you're staying! YAY

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/18/2016 12:46:00 PM

Indeed the last line says it all...Not even if those ass ho*es are disproportioned or stretched in ways to look squarish...Still Square pegs will never fit.You put a smile on my face Paloma : ).Haha.Liked this.

Paloma P
Date: 11/18/2016 2:58:00 PM

In turn, you made me smile, thanks Charmaine. I'm sure we all know a few. :)