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I have a few minutes and no more To read some poems right now. I grab some coffee and peruse As many as I can allow. I’ve had my fix and so I’m off For the duties of the day. I dare not sign in and comment. Too much time will get away. Some times there is a poem Of which I can’t make sense. I cannot write about it, Because I am too dense. Once in a while, one makes me blush. My mama would be shocked. It surely is not so bad to others Or else it would be blocked. So I don’t comment on it And am swiftly on my way. I take time to answer others And always mean what I say. I never rate less than seven. So if you hear from me. You can be sure that I enjoyed it And will want some more to see. So this is my entry, Hgarvey Esquire, I hope it catches your eye. But if it’s not what you desire, It’s okay…. just pass it by. For Commments vs View contest Won No. 2

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Date: 11/26/2010 10:23:00 AM
well done Joyce @:)>
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Date: 11/11/2010 4:51:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on this well deserved win.
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2010 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful Joyce, just wonderful. You made me chuckle this evening. Many congratulations on your win in HG's contest >> James :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:58:00 AM
love the humor in the last stanza, congrats on your win Joyce
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:32:00 AM
Dear " MOM " I Thank-YOU for supporting My First Contest Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place win in my Contest : "Comments Verses Views" A Portrait of what the Contest asked for YOU are With-In My Heart ALWAYS LOVE, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest, Joyce. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest Joyce. Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:23:00 AM
I guess it did catch his eye..and mind too..well done and congrats to you..BG
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:39:00 AM
Super congrats Joyce on your big win in HG's contest on comments and views.. a superb entry my friend and a well deserved top win..enjoy with lots of luv..
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Date: 10/17/2010 4:26:00 PM
A cute, clever and honest write. Good luck in the contest Joyce!
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:19:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Joyce. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 9:53:00 AM
Interesting and wonderfully expressed Joyce.. good luck in HG's first contest.. my entry is "R.E.S.P.E.C.T." ..good luck my friend..with luv..
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