Coming Up Roses

The roses are dead;
the violets are too.
The candy I bought?
Mold-encrusted blue…

I tried to cook dinner,
but burned up the steak.
Those dazzling earrings?
Turns out they’re a fake.

I found a nice card
for your valentine;
It was quite delightful,
but Visa declined.

So I’ve taken a pill
and come back to bed.
What’s coming up roses
is best left unsaid.

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for the Valentine Gift Card Creation Poetry Contest
sponsored by Bobby May
written on 12/28/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Hahahaha, Jeff , I enjoyed reading your Valentin Card. Congratulations on your win in Bobby's contest. Have a blessed day my friend
Alex Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 8:23 PM
A poignantly great work. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. A fun/romantic write. Have a blessed day.................
Fowler Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Back with congratulations on your win Jeff - I still love it!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 10:11 PM
This is a winner my friend! I am sure it will be up there in the podium finish.
Fowler Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 2:19 PM
My kind of card Jeff! love it!
Bauer Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 1:35 PM
ha! hilarious! best of luck in the contest...
Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 10:18 AM
A creative write. A+ for trying. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023.........
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