Coming Up Roses

A mermaid fresh from the ocean
Found Kalahari Rose Lotion*
On her treasure chest
It brought out the best
For seamen second the motion

* developed by Soup Poet
Susan Lawrence 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Anaya Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Love it, the mermaid vibe, all of it! Is there a website, I would love to try it, in need for lotion, I bought snail-extract hand lotion, by mistake at one time!
Leffanta Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Try: kalaharirose.com/discount/FIRSTTIME Aloha!
George Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:06 PM
It is a new information. Susan has other interests too. Let her Kalahari Rose lotion become popular!
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Like you, Susan's attitude makes all the difference! Aloha!
Lawrence Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Love it !! Your mind doesn’t quit ! Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on seeing it through to the Finish! If Kalahari Rose is as successful as your poetry, you will have an happy Christmas! Aloha 'oe!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 1:14 PM
LOL!
Kyser Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Enjoyed - posted a companion, couldn't resist :-)
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