Coming Storm

Tail lights fade slowly
as she drives away
the room is silent
her perfume lingers
accumulating on the horizon
like a storm cloud...

Her whispers remain
as a distant mutter
dampness on the sheets
I glow in the halo of her pleasure


Is this sweet love?
rain is falling
clouds roll winds of change
sky turns blue and black...

Caught in loves ambrosial rain
storm, I know you are coming...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 5:28 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..So she can love 'em and leave 'em..Thanks for stopping by..That 'ole Mississippi just keeps on a rollin'...Sara
Carroll Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:29 PM
Ominous!!! And makes for very provocative poetry!!!
Carroll Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Thank you Andrea for visiting!
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:34 PM
- After the storm ..... the air is cleaned .... love fragrances again - Romantic and beautiful, Ken!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Anne..Hope you're having a lovely day..
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Beautiful....passionate.....strong...captivating.....lovely
Carroll Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Eileen for the kindest comment..
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