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Coming Storm

Tail lights fade slowly as she drives away the room is silent her perfume lingers accumulating on the horizon like a storm cloud... Her whispers remain as a distant mutter dampness on the sheets I glow in the halo of her pleasure Is this sweet love? rain is falling clouds roll winds of change sky turns blue and black... Caught in loves ambrosial rain storm, I know you are coming... ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2014 5:28:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..So she can love 'em and leave 'em..Thanks for stopping by..That 'ole Mississippi just keeps on a rollin'...Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/10/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 4/9/2014 10:29:00 PM
Ominous!!! And makes for very provocative poetry!!!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/9/2014 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for visiting!
Date: 4/9/2014 1:34:00 PM
- After the storm ..... the air is cleaned .... love fragrances again - Romantic and beautiful, Ken!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/9/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Anne..Hope you're having a lovely day..
Date: 4/9/2014 1:17:00 PM
Beautiful....passionate.....strong...captivating.....lovely
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/9/2014 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for the kindest comment..

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