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As wartime’s ending leaves behind scarred traces of its furious hunts, a melancholy cast of mind endures this pang with hope ablaze. Where flies the gold and russet morn, as autumn’s languid trail departs and cruel frost of winter grips, when hardened heart against it stands. And yet this fall contrives to hold a promise tinged by coming home; that onward creeps this riddled war yet kindled gut lies spritely blazed. For with this season's chime, at last, one dream remains in dwelling’s glow whose light will soothe his brittle wounds, till country bound, a torment, hushed. A Briand Strand Contest : Premiere 135 Submitted 3/21/2018

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Date: 6/4/2016 3:04:00 AM
Such a glowing tribute, such imagery lingers in the mind. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2016 2:55:00 PM
Great poem, Nette! Especially suitable around Memorial Day here in the states...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 6/3/2016 6:27:00 AM
Great write Nette, a very deserving honor...
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:22:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 6/2/2016 9:50:00 PM
WOW, Nette, I am impressed!!! This poem seems so far from your "usual" style. More crisp, terse yet still alive with vivid visuals. It is a wonderful tribute to all who have served in the too many wars fought. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2016 3:57:00 PM
Magnificent Nette! I wish I could write with the depth that you write with. #7 ; )
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Date: 5/22/2016 6:57:00 AM
"As wartime’s ending leaves behind, scarred traces of its furious hunts, a melancholy cast of mind, endures this pang with hope ablaze" You have penned the thoughts of a soldier returning from war very nicely dear friend. A cool nice poem with hopes for peace and happy time. My good wishes for your entry with a 7+. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 5/22/2016 5:48:00 AM
Cutting edge poetry! You write of a universal concern with uniquely specific imagery.Bring our soldiers home!
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:07:00 AM
Poetry's bloom dear, Andrea! What a gardener!
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:44:00 PM
nette, this is B E A U T I F U L and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 5/21/2016 4:12:00 PM
Wow nette, this is classic poetry at it's best, just love the theme, and how you weave the words with sentiment so profound..
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Date: 5/21/2016 3:06:00 PM
If only homecomings were not met with pained anticipation.A timely message for a world needing much peace. This poem is laden with magnificent images!
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