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Coming First

They tell you in an airplane If you see the dangling masks, Place one on your own face first; Yet somebody always asks, “Well, then, what about my children Or my spouse, who’s old and frail? Shouldn’t I take care of them before My own needs should prevail?” Yet the answer is consistent – We must place ourselves ahead For we cannot care for others If our strength seeps out instead. Such a lesson should be taken To all aspects of our lives: Those who sacrifice too much may find The soul no longer thrives. So no matter who may need us, Though our love may be dispersed, We'll have so much more for giving If we tend to ourselves first.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/29/2018 2:51:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats Ilene, so lovely to see you entering contests :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2018 12:30:00 PM
Ilene, congratulations on your win! Nicely done :)
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Date: 7/28/2018 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:48:00 PM
Nicely done, Ilene, congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
Very true words ilene. Tom
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:21:00 PM
Nicely written rhyme, Ilene. Best wishes to you in the contest too!
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:57:00 PM
Like my daddy always said,"if you don't, nobody else will" Sound advice, Ilene:)
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:56:00 PM
Wise words indeed Ilene - I hope I am never in the position where the masks come down when I'm flying it must be a scary experience!! Hugs jan xx
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