Coming Back Home

Coming Back Home 

Called home my nomadic heart yearns to unpack scattered shadows,
Ornaments of new year snowstorms and souvenirs of summer places,
Mirrors found in attic reflections - hallmarks of nostalgia,
Image refractions of mirages battered milestones -
Nests of hidden pleas and prayers in locked trunks -
Garlands of tangled seasons and dried bouquets.

Blue winds embrace Orion’s pirouette on mountain points
As abandoned minutes surrender in reunion to
Call back identities shed like out grown skin,
Kindle roaring beasts - fire storm’s passions swooping down.

Home awaiting unspoken future days when trying on again
Outgrown masks of jeopardy discarded, seeking crannies of warm hearths, 
Making room for nascent triumphs to tickle laughter no longer stooping 
Even as my nomad heart wanders only to return in primal circles.

2-24-21
Contest:  Coming Back Home Acrostic
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/8/2021 4:15:00 PM
this is one of my favourites on the winners' list..it's a different take, unusual, with great use of language - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/8/2021 3:32:00 PM
Heart yearns to unpack scattered shadows--brilliant opening Sam, that captured the reader from start to finish. Details of your verses paint the scenes so well. Congrats on your win In John's contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/8/2021 8:32:00 AM
Sam, congratulations in John's contest with this Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2021 1:14:00 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:48:00 AM
Hi Alexis! Thank you for your congratulatory message! Love to write acrostics. They present a unique challenge. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of home and hearth!
Date: 3/7/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for your entry, congrats Sam on a nice placement!
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:46:00 AM
Thank you John. Fun theme to explore. Sending you blessings of music and song!
Date: 3/1/2021 10:00:00 PM
EXCELLENT. I am whelmed. Hugs.
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:43:00 AM
Anisha, many thanks! Sending hugs and blessings back to you!
Date: 2/28/2021 3:55:00 PM
All the lines in this beautifully crafted acrostic poem are superb, but I love the first and last line the most - about your Normadic Heart. I can read this poem again and again! Love ~ Mala
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:43:00 AM
Your message warms my nomadic heart Mala. Thank you! You truly honor me with your repeat readings of this poem. I do love to create acrostics and the creative opportunities they afford. Hope you are well. Sending blessings to you!
Date: 2/27/2021 2:19:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I like how you mention your nomads heart in the beginning and in the end. Best of luck in the contest. I'm sure this is a winner.
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Evelyn for your gracious encouragement! Seems life's journeys come back to the staring point often but I find I have a different perspective with each return! Hope you are well. All the best!
Date: 2/26/2021 1:25:00 PM
May your nomad heart always find strength upon every return. I can see the wisdom in the words you pen her today. Thank you for sharing, keep well.
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2021 10:27:00 AM
Hi MMR! Thank you for your both encouraging and uplifting words! Seems like this wandering heart makes a full circle but hopefully comes back stronger and wiser! Stay well. All the best!
Date: 2/25/2021 12:47:00 PM
There is always much to go through when we've been away for a long time. I like your creative approach to the theme! I think John will like your entry. Best wishes for success in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Kauffman Avatar
Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/26/2021 9:17:00 AM
So grateful for your always encouraging messages. They are a blessing! And, you are so right. Just got home from a trip to the northwest. I can't find anything and I am slowly whittling away at the "to do" list! Hope you, and family, are well dear friend. Thank you for yuour "wishes." Sending your blessings!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter