Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Comfortably Numb Feelings -

Oh now sad frog located on the sandy beach
Emotions raging around the body as an Icelandic volcano
burning holds in a vice grips deeply 
Stranded in the cemetery of broken hearts
It is as if parts of the heart where torn out
shreaded from the body without an anesthesia
Deep arrow strikes in Golden Sunshine beams
Maybe he worry for no reason
Warm thoughts sail faraway yonder
An endless sandy beach, white as snow
washed with the blue ocean in brilliant yellow sunlight
Singing dreams kissing lips hold an oasis close
She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough
In the hot summer sun burning heart yearns


It does not matter what it is 
or where it leads them
as long as it creates an inner glow
Singing sizzles relighting loves croaking flames
Infatuation may be coming - but volatile
ignites when paper lips hold tears prisoner 
Positively resonated does not appear out of the blue
Falling salt seasoned spice
Trail seeking light
This is a powerful and invigorating moment
Jumping angry to paradise
Shedding the green shirt of a Queen
She was cold, but the sun stroked her
soft and warm over the cheeks





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  26.06.2015 
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Bl Devnath July 10, 2015 at 1:20 PM Warmth of love expressed beautifully. Nice collab my lovely lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2015 at 2:23 PM - Thanks my friend Bl, for visiting a 7 and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock July 6, 2015 at 10:18 AM Very artistic and creative Anne Lise and Liam. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen July 6, 2015 at 11:40 AM - Thanks dear Phyllis, for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama July 2, 2015 at 10:34 AM Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share. Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2015 at 10:56 AM - Funom, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 29, 2015 at 7:31 AM Anne Lise and Liam, cute poem and story!!! lovely!!! descriptive that you bring me there..! hugs and hugs!!~Olive Eloisa Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2015 at 10:47 AM - Thanks Olive, for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler June 28, 2015 at 10:19 PM A unique story of love the two of you have written here. Very creative work, Anne-Lise and Liam! Wonderful imagery! Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2015 at 10:48 AM - Hi Kelly, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton June 28, 2015 at 6:51 PM lost within your lines Anne Lise and Liam delightful poem hugs Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2015 at 10:46 AM - Shadow, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish June 28, 2015 at 4:31 PM "She drinks his kiss as if one could never get enough" Nice line! You two have achieved much with your collaboration! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2015 at 10:45 AM - Matthew, I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ndaba Sibanda June 28, 2015 at 1:54 PM Anne,there is something that glows and flows about this poem. It is BEAUTY... Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 2:15 PM - I thank you for pleasant visit on our poem, Ndaba - always a pleasure to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 28, 2015 at 1:54 PM A powerful, emotive write and another awesome collab! She was cold but the sun stroked her - love that line! We're you inspired by the song, Comfortably Numb, for the title? Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 2:03 PM - No dear Rhonda, I was "comfortably numb" :))) ..... sometimes Liam gives me some lines, which gives me that feeling :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2015 at 1:30 PM what an interesting title this one has and also interesting imagery. It's a very descriptive poem you two came up with. Good job~ Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 1:41 PM - It is often the title of the poem that "catches my interest" .... not "who" has written it - I read and comments "all" different poems, it is always exciting :) - You can find a "golden pearl" ... or more :) - Thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez June 28, 2015 at 11:16 AM lovely thoughts here, as always, Anne. Hope you're having a great weekend. hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 1:28 PM - Kim, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 28, 2015 at 10:21 AM you and liam are a superb team, anne.. this is so heartwarming and full of deep sentiment.. really fine read this sunday.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 1:28 PM - Nette, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley June 28, 2015 at 3:14 AM Lovely collaboration, works so well. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 1:28 PM - Viv, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen June 28, 2015 at 3:05 AM A stunning write painted with emotion and vivid imagery. I enjoy this piece and thanks for this great collaboration, excellent write for both...........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2015 at 1:27 PM - Afolabi, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter June 26, 2015 at 11:43 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautifully written free verse poem by you my dearest friends.I sense a lot of sadness in this excellent piece,but well that could be only me and my own personal interpretation of it.Great imagery.Just dazzling.A very beautiful n' amazing poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!Awesome collaboration!Enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each of you!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!Keep your faith Liam!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen June 27, 2015 at 7:37 AM - Thanks Dorian, for visiting a 7 and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise:)

Sara Kendrick June 26, 2015 at 5:38 PM Interesting collaboration going on here..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 27, 2015 at 7:35 AM - Sara, thanks for visiting and comments on Liam's and my co-write : - Comfortably Numb Feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France June 26, 2015 at 1:23 PM Anne-Lise, a beautifully penned poem, you both did a terrific job writing it, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, not that long ago, my grandma was able to work and did not neglect her children but yes many working women did and still do, my own Mom did not work until we were all in school all day and she was home when we got home from school Anne-Lise Andresen June 26, 2015 at 1:28 PM - A safety for children that someone is at home when they come from school :) - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments B.W. - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid June 26, 2015 at 10:19 AM the poor old frog is always croaking smiling anne lise this was a fun write your input sang this to a whole new level wishing you pal a wonderful weekend and also thank you gary and tom for the heartfelt wonderful comments Anne-Lise Andresen June 26, 2015 at 10:58 AM - Smile and pleasure to write with you, dear Liam :))) - A beautiful weekend for you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman June 26, 2015 at 8:26 AM Anne-Lise Dear One!! Now you know by now, I think, that "Froggy Poems" are among my favorite!! (Liam and I did a couple of froggy subject co-writes last year that were much fun . . . smile!!) The imagery and storyline here are great. And I'm glad that at the last "Froggy" gets here cold cheeks warmly and softly stroked by the sun. Enjoyed this one. A great free verse write. A "7" + FAV!! Anne-Lise Andresen June 26, 2015 at 8:42 AM - I was not "completely safe" in this area :)))) - I'm glad you liked it, dear friend Gary - Thanks for visiting, a seven - and especially your "fav." - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)