Cometh Night and Day

Golden heads of meadow flowers stand proud
The setting sun
Calls to the
Evening
To 
Start
Over
As shadows
Begin to form
Another night before once more the day.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 7:57 AM
A 24 hour cycle of night and day so elegantly penned Harry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 3, 2020 at 6:48 PM
I really like the imagery you project in this excellent Tetractys, Harry! :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 3:46 AM
Creative and expressive winning work. Way to go ...Congrats on your place of honor. Sara
Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Your artistry shines in the delicate beauty of your poem, Harry. I appreciate the unique perspective of your poetic pen, my dear friend. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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October 2, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Beautifully done, Harry! Congratulations on your top win. Hugs, Carolyn
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October 2, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Harry. I love the theme in your," Cometh Night & Day'', it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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October 2, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful imagery and flow from night to night, Harry. Congratulations on your win!
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:36 AM
- Beautiful written, Harry :) - Congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 5:41 AM
Wondrous picture Harry. Congratulations! Linda
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October 1, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Great tetractys, Harry. Congrats on your win and bravo on a fine piece
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September 30, 2020 at 8:21 AM
This is really lovely, Harry! Janice
Tor Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 7:29 PM
Love the imagery Harry and this form is difficult to do, and you have mastered it. A wonderful entry my friend...
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September 28, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Excellent descriptive poem, Harry. Great one for the contest. Wish you luck. ~~
Proxenos Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Eve will love this Tertractys - so real, so vivid and a reality of life. Well penned Harry. Hugs aand blessings, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:34 AM
what a lovely picture this conjures up - love this one, Harry
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Love this. I swear everyone has chosen the same picture except for the one I saw Sunshine do!!!
Faulkner Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Love those proud flowers standing tall, and the shadows of starting over, well done, harry!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Great imagery Harry, all the best in Eve’s contest.
Sands Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Very nice Harry. Well done :)
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 5:25 AM
So true--cleverly done, harry.
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 1:48 AM
The march of time never stops Harry, great imagery in your lines. Good luck Tom
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