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Come With Me, Dear

Last eve, alone, sometime between the moon and dawn; that space between the real and what is just a dream, a chilling breath of wind flew past the curtains drawn shadows slid towards my bed; I tried, failed to scream.  A dark-masked hooded face closed in and pressed to mine; from raven lips, I felt a hissing foul-stench breath with words to dread; "tonight, you'll be my Columbine." Then stroked my tear-stained cheek with fingers, cold as death. I watched in fear; I could not, dare not, close my eyes; cartwheels, somersaults, upon my body, bed; grotesque antics by this beast in devil's own disguise. Down, down to fiery Hades, I was being led. Dry rawboned hands were pulling forceful at my feet; And as he pulled, I slid, the monster once more spoke; "Come with me, dear; there's someone that you need to meet." What would suit my dream, that I sleep, or I awoke? 12-16 Lines of a Scary Halloween Rhyme Poetry Contest; placed 2nd Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Date wrote: 24th October 2022 Rhymes: wikirhymer dot com

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Date: 10/31/2022 5:39:00 PM
Please wake up, Terry! It's too scary. Congrats on your win!
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/2/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Ann; I did enjoy writing this; I changed the last line a few times.
Date: 10/31/2022 8:44:00 AM
Chilling write Terry, this one goes right up the spine!
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/2/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Hat I appreciate your comments
Date: 10/31/2022 7:03:00 AM
Oh my. "Is it cold in here, or is it just me?" ;) Congratulations on your great win Terry! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/2/2022 8:19:00 AM
Just a bit chilly ;-) Thank you, Linda, for your kind comments.
Date: 10/31/2022 5:24:00 AM
Creepy Terry, Very Creepy! No wonder your high placement!! Congratulations and Happy Halloween!
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/2/2022 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 10/31/2022 3:09:00 AM
Chilled my bones, Terry. Excellent entry for the contest. Congratulations on your placement in Tania's contest! Charlie
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/2/2022 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Charles; I did enjoy writing this one.
Date: 10/30/2022 5:13:00 PM
Stephen King eat your heart out. A nightmare on speed there, Terry. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/31/2022 2:00:00 AM
Thank you, Terry I always appreciate your comments
Date: 10/30/2022 4:26:00 PM
Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your scary poem!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/31/2022 2:01:00 AM
Thank you, Tania, for the placement and for running the contest; I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge
Date: 10/25/2022 7:14:00 AM
What a great wonderfully scary poem Terry! I really enjoyed it!! Debx
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/29/2022 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb. I enjoyed writing this. Terry
Date: 10/24/2022 6:04:00 AM
Excellent Terry. I was fearful of how this poem was going to end. You had the reader right where you wanted them, goose bumps and all... until the crash. This is a worthy submission for a win. Good Luck.
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2022 11:10:00 AM
Hi Wendy, I just changed the ending!

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