Come To Me

Come to me in the breaking of the day Be there for me when my thoughts have gone astray Sing to me from the branches on the oak Look for me in pages that we wrote Come to me when the sun absorbs the dust Stay with me in my arms of love and trust Be with me when my worries come to mind Pray for me for salvation I do find Come to me at the dawning of the night Share with me these feelings held so tight Join with me in breaking of the bread Care for me in the promises you said Come to me for is now I need you near Come to me and wash away my fear

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/2/2016 3:04:00 PM

This is a very comforting poem for me right now thank you for writing it. No my poetry is not there Tim.. so I will try again. Thank you I'll let you know when I succeed.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/28/2016 11:57:00 PM

beautiful,If I were to take Jeans thoughts, this is a prayer for the truly romantics in life. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/26/2016 4:16:00 PM

Hi Tim...I said before that I like your free verse, but I must also add that same comment to rhyme!! This is beautiful, so inspiring and uplifting! #7+ // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2016 1:43:00 PM

- A truly sensitive poems, Tim - It's beautiful ! - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/25/2016 5:09:00 PM

Wow Tim, this one floats on a soft breeze as I read it today. Such an endearing love poem. Bravo.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/25/2016 4:09:00 PM

I feel the need and the longing my friend. Hang in there, she's out there somewhere. Really nice, Tim. just a touch of sadness.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/25/2016 2:31:00 PM

Beautiful , Tim. I like this.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Heidi

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2016 2:05:00 PM

I am sure you are a natural carer for those who need comfort..I hope if anyone feel lost will know they could always come to you..Great comforting poem Tim.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/25/2016 3:33:00 PM

Im sure your kids will Tim..No better comfort than that of a daughter or son..Christina only four..and when She sees me too silent..She comes to cuddle me..Yes family .

Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Charma. I know you are that way too. I just wish I had someone to comfort me at times.

Jean Murray

Date: 10/25/2016 1:56:00 PM

OMG Tim, this is so beautiful. It would be a perfect prayer in a wedding cermony.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/25/2016 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Jean...that is so sweet to say