Come To Me

I look towards the foaming sea The clouds go by, the wind runs free I stand upon the tremblin’ quay And wonder now where you could be I call your name but all in vain. The crashing waves encroach the land Never will I hold your hand It is hard to understand I am in tears and pain. Hark, he cometh on sturdy steed Sir Lancelot, I must concede Would surely fill this empty need His gentleness, of tender breed Perhaps he'll cast his eyes on me. Fair Guinevere had caught his eye Though he left her with a sigh As the king was standing nigh Behold me; I am free. --------------------------------------------------------- 22nd August 2014 A Collaboration ~ Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire Contest: The Lady of Shalott Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placing: 1st

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/27/2020 3:14:00 PM

Interesting collaboration. It's a lovely romantic tale.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/28/2020 5:07:00 PM

Thank you for coming back to reread this poem, Eileen. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Theresa Stephens

Date: 9/16/2014 8:00:00 AM

Hi Paul & Carolyn, Enjoyed the angst of the lovelorn in your collaboration. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards Theresa xx

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2014 9:57:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed this write, Theresa. It has been a spontaneous and rewarding collaboration. Regards, /x/ paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/15/2014 9:10:00 AM

A pleasure to read this fine write... Big congrats on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2014 9:54:00 AM

I am pleased you enjoyed this poem written by Carolyn and myself. Thank you, Robert, for stopping by with pleasant wishes and comments. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/15/2014 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations Paul and Carolyn on this wonderfully written poem. I see her there looking out at the sea. Very well done.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2014 9:52:00 AM

Hi Brenda! Thank you...both visit and comments are most welcome.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/15/2014 1:35:00 AM

Very romantic poem, congrats, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2014 9:50:00 AM

Thank you from both of us DR. Namaskar!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/14/2014 10:01:00 PM

Wowsers...what a great day, so glad to see in the winners circle. Enjoy....BG

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2014 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely multiple wow, Barbara! I appreciate your support:) // paul

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/25/2014 8:55:00 PM

Sometimes freedom and love struggle to coexist Paul. I like the indecision in this poem. J.A.B.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/26/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Justin, for the visit and insightful read. It all makes sense! cu // paul

Angie Thomas

Date: 8/24/2014 11:44:00 AM

It's a very romantic poem with a poignant feel to it... I really liked it :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/24/2014 3:21:00 PM

So glad you found it to your liking, Angie. Thanks for stopping by....again! // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/23/2014 2:27:00 AM

A beautiful romantic write! This took me back in time a bit, to those days of knights in shining armor.... I love when a poem can transport me to another place and time! A wonderful collaboration! Good luck to you both in Isaiah's contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2014 4:05:00 AM

Good morning Kelly! So glad we managed to transport you back in time with this romantic write. Thank you for the visit and wishes:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2014 12:13:00 AM

REading here your reply to me. I was looking over his rules again and he was saying he wanted 3 to 7 verses!!! That kind of puts me off. I don't even think yours is more than two verses, is it? I mean, you divided it up like four, but each verse is 9 lines, right? I wonder if I got that wrong.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2014 3:52:00 AM

Hi Andrea, if I got it right he says that he would prefer 3 to 7, but did not specifically ask for it. I have seen another write with only one.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2014 8:31:00 AM

I am a sucker for the romantic times of knights and maidens. You and your partner have done well with this piece.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 10:09:00 AM

Thank you Richard; glad you like it. I suppose writes like these take us back to younger days when romance, dreams and fantasy played a big part in our lives. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/22/2014 4:46:00 AM

Like the collaboration..:) the write the beat and the sweetness of this write.. You made me read the tale of Guinevere. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:55:00 AM

Hiiiiiii Olive_eloi !!:)) I see you are managing to make use of internet! Thank you for the 'like' and the sweet comments. May your present life story also turn out to have a fairy-story ending! hugs and :))))) // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/22/2014 4:35:00 AM

Lovely collab by two amazing poets. I love the romance .....I love the rhyme. It is a beautiful write.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:49:00 AM

Hi Eileen, your comments are music to the ears:) Your words always come from the heart. Thank you so very much. May you have a lovely weekend. hugs. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2014 1:59:00 AM

WOW awesome collaboration - good luck in the contest Paul and Carolyn this is fabulous:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:39:00 AM

Many thanks Jan! Your lovely comments are truly appreciated. I am sure Carolyn too will be pleased with your response. Hugs and have a nice weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2014 1:32:00 AM

This one sure looks to be a challenge and it looks like you met it head on! I hope I can do this well! ( I LOVE the tale of Guinevere)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:14:00 AM

It is a challenge, but I have no doubt you will rise to it, Andrea!! Looking forward to reading your entry :) // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/22/2014 1:16:00 AM

Captivating. imaginative and profound, dear Paul! Nice to see you again!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:11:00 AM

Welcome back Demi! Mother Earth and Soup need your support. Glad you find this collaborative write to your liking; Carolyn never fails to deliver. Thanks for the visit! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/21/2014 10:20:00 PM

It's always a pleasure to write with you, Paul. You make it fun with your inspiration. We could go on like this for years :D Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:07:00 AM

Same here, Carolyn. Your encouragement and belief are an integral part of the formula! :) // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/21/2014 9:54:00 PM

That is a beautiful write, I wonder who the collab was with! :)

Casarah Nance
Date: 8/22/2014 7:01:00 AM

Cool :) lovely to see you both working so well together :) Best of luck :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/22/2014 7:00:00 AM

Hi Casarah!Thank you for being the first to stop by and leaving your lovely comments. Carolyn is fun and easy to work with. have a nice weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/21/2014 10:19:00 PM

Shhh. LOL We're anonymous in the contest, Casarah. Paul and I are enjoying co-writing.