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Come Live With Me

come live with me by the piney woods near the river that turns toward the sea In the meadow we'll build our home and together plant a sweet apple tree near the river that turns toward the sea we can greet each coming of spring and together plant a sweet apple tree working until fall's harvest comes we can greet each coming of spring In the meadow we'll build our home working until fall's harvest comes come live with me by the piney woods

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/28/2011 5:39:00 PM
so glad to see this one has advanced along with one other in the finals of the big Soup contest, Barbara. Way to go!
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your pantoum making it to the finals. Good luck. Love, joyce
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Date: 12/12/2011 2:23:00 PM
There is something truly enchanting about this write. One can feel the scene in all the senses. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:23:00 AM
awesome poem Barbara, glad i've seen this. harry
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week BG. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contest. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Dear Barbara A Great POEM A Great Win by a Great POETESS All My LOVE, YOUR Liege, ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:35:00 PM
what a perfect topic for a pantoum. You created a great poem with that lovely form. Congrats,BArbara.
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:17:00 AM
Big congrats on your win, dear LNC. Maybe we can erect our teepee by this river. You're still in charge of the firewood. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congrats BG on your 2nd place win in Brian's contest... a lovely write...
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful piece of poetic expressions, Barbara
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