Barbara Gorelick Poet Pantoum

Come Live With Me

come live with me by the piney woods
near the river that turns toward the sea
In the meadow we'll build our home
and together plant a sweet apple tree

near the river that turns toward the sea
we can greet each coming of spring
and together plant a sweet apple tree
working until fall's harvest comes

we can greet each coming of spring
In the meadow we'll build our home
working until fall's harvest comes
come live with me by the piney woods

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2011 at 5:39 PM so glad to see this one has advanced along with one other in the finals of the big Soup contest, Barbara. Way to go!

Joyce Johnson December 28, 2011 at 5:24 PM Congratulations on your pantoum making it to the finals. Good luck. Love, joyce

Daver Austin December 12, 2011 at 2:23 PM There is something truly enchanting about this write. One can feel the scene in all the senses. Congrats on the selection. daver

Harry Horsman December 12, 2011 at 10:23 AM awesome poem Barbara, glad i've seen this. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown December 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week BG. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 4:30 AM Congratulations Barbara for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contest. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire June 12, 2011 at 6:18 PM Congratulations Dear Barbara A Great POEM A Great Win by a Great POETESS All My LOVE, YOUR Liege, ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2011 at 1:35 PM what a perfect topic for a pantoum. You created a great poem with that lovely form. Congrats,BArbara.

Carolyn Devonshire June 10, 2011 at 10:17 AM Big congrats on your win, dear LNC. Maybe we can erect our teepee by this river. You're still in charge of the firewood. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 10, 2011 at 5:59 AM Congrats BG on your 2nd place win in Brian's contest... a lovely write...

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 6:32 PM Beautiful piece of poetic expressions, Barbara