Come Gently

Come gently like a winding trellis
stroking my shape as you fondle
 my vulnerability, and tease,
 tease curves of my spine with whispers
to unleash what is half-awake in my eyes,
draping my flesh with the scent 
of this moistened night…
And I am lost among fibrous roots
clinging to a warm pistil 
like a raging dart,a moonlit flame.
Your bended arms warmly mount
 my transparent skin,
only to hold back as the dizzy air
 blows these ruffled tresses
 smelling of earth and jasmine...

You gaze at the cleavage 
of an open mouth, wandering
 on a tight pulse between 
the trellis of desire...how in this
hungry glow, I cannot explain why
your irises slay me bare;
that on a sweltering duskfall
so mysteriously anonymous,
I seem to ask you to come gently
and touch my waiting steam.


Contest of Lewis Raynes That Is Sexy
6/22/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mandani Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:52 AM
OUTSTANDING!!
De Burca Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Great sensual poem and like the other poets comments so many good lines to pick from, well done, congrats on your win.
Puddifoot Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 3:47 AM
aww should've placed much higher, nette, one of the best i've seen from you, i really love this one, too many great lines to pick out - congrats!
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:06 AM
Congrats on your win with this subtle and sweet write, my dear. To teas curves of your spine with whispers is such a lovely string of words...Beautiful
Hlabisa Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 5:20 AM
love, love, love your poem. Congrats, keep up the great poetry
Walker  Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations Nette on your high marks in the contest. Enjoyed... Verlena
Parker Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 6:44 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, my thoughts were already spinning as I read this your last stanza is heart racing
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Tasteful gentle seductive poem many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:15 PM
- Dear Nette a well deserved 2nd place !!!! - A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 10:53 AM
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL AND TASTEFUL! WONDERFUL. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I am totally impressed! Big Smiles.
Yvonne Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Jaw Dropping nette. Congratulations on your huge win. God Bless!
Kayode Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Super,congrats Nette.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations Nette.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Wow Nette that's an amazing work! Congrats on huge win dear!
Bordner Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:07 AM
Mmmmm.....to uproot your loneliness into my palm plush in tender grip, pinching the petals of your thin soft romance, rubbing them open to my face of shaded delight, my sumptuous specie of rarest flower I cup you with pollenated power..."Touch my waiting steam..." Ooooo...that's hot and lovely Nette, and I am enchanted by, "So mystetiously anonymous. .." this is an amazingly sensuous, and expert use of a flower lust metaphor Nette, a masterpiece and FAV. J.A.B.
Anish Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Nice double entendre here! A pretty, sensuous write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:57 PM
wow, this is a GREAT seductive poem. Is it for that particular contest? It sure seems perfectly suited for it, Nette, and should be a top poem in that challenge! the ending is really wonderful. The whole thing, I love it.
Greece Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:17 PM
This is the stuff poets strive for! Excellent piece for one who surely knows how to fire up the senses. Thanks a lot for commenting on my poem.
Lalion Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:42 PM
I'm on a sabbatical leave from this flight of passion only to be tripped off the page and grabbed by your inviting, supreme write... whew, a pleasure to read a poem as rare as this ( stewing?).I'm blown away, Nette
Austin Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Difficult to come gently what with the humidity and aroma and all. I like this for the tenderness and sensitivity. Love, daver
Trifiatis Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Erotic but blushful, sensual yet shy, provoking although on guard! A lady's expression of passion wrapped in caution! Excellent, dear nette!
Em Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 9:17 AM
This brought all the senses together,so tempting---- yet you managed to keep it at such a classy level.Nette I might have found the female version of DH Lawrence in you. Thank you!
Paras Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Uhmm, damn. The scene says it all without being too obvious.You weave artful erotica as a siren tempting all of man to drown withing the waves of you And what male i ask could ever refuse? Just wow, wow, Nette.
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:49 AM
- A soft and romantic poem my friend Nette ! - A pleasure to read :) - I hope your Tuesday will be lovely and full of romance <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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