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Come Close To Me - Quietus

Come close to me, dearest sweet love.
Hum echoes in my dreams
Let me hear your voice from above,
Elated as love seems.

Each night I feel your kiss,
Darling, you are my bliss,
Hold me tight dear like this.

I care for thee,
Come close to me.

Quietus

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/21/2023 10:20:00 AM

Hello Victor. This is a little gem not to mention quiet beautiful to be shared between two special people. Your words say everything in such a loving and feeling way. This touches any heart who reads this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I hope you are staying safe. I can't believe we are almost into February. Have a great and peaceful weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 3:20:00 PM

This is beautiful. Heartfelt and sincere, it reads with deepest love.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/20/2023 10:04:00 AM

Lovely words Victor, nostalgic and lovingly romantic… Belle

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2023 3:02:00 AM

Your love for your wife shines in your poetry, my friend. I have to admit I needed the dictionary for "quietus" Very nice!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2023 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Victor. I hardly ever come across the word quietus nowadays. I remember reading it somewhere in Shakespeare many years ago! ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2023 7:51:00 AM

- Romantic and warm poem ... love it, Victor :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 1/17/2023 5:22:00 AM

A blissful dream of love, Wonderful write Victor

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2023 5:09:00 AM

Beautifully romantic!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/17/2023 5:09:00 AM

Oh wow! Title should be the refrain though ~ Come close to me. Beautifully penned Victor! An outstanding Quietus

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/17/2023 3:38:00 AM

Beautiful one, Victor, I do like this form very much:)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/16/2023 9:57:00 PM

Incredibly beautiful, and I can imagine, true as well. The depth of your love is undying, and precious Victor.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/16/2023 6:25:00 PM

Dear Victor, the sad beauty of your poem captures my soulful imagination. The mingling of love and grief and dreams so exquisitely and intimately expressed. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Michael Tor

Date: 1/16/2023 4:40:00 PM

Beautifully written Victor your heart is a passionate one my friend...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/16/2023 3:43:00 PM

Such a beautiful dream, best you don't want to awaken from it, Victor :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2023 2:08:00 PM

this is SO nice and I love the form too.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/16/2023 10:49:00 AM

Sad, yet beautiful, romantic reflections, from the still of the night. Blessings.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/16/2023 9:12:00 AM

Purely sublime Víctor, you evoke tender intimacy with your soulful words.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2023 8:14:00 AM

Beautifully romantic Victor, when you finally awake you're in a happy mood for the rest of the day. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/16/2023 7:10:00 AM

Victor, your writing is excellent. I felt both delight and sorrow when reading this moving poetry. Thank you for sharing it.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2023 6:24:00 AM

Our loved ones come to visit in our dreams. Well felt. hugs eve

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2023 6:15:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem, Victor. You shine in this form.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/16/2023 4:55:00 AM

Victor, a emotive poem with both grief and love, well penned.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2023 3:17:00 AM

My mother would dream about my father after his passing and say it was like he was right there. I enjoyed reading your work passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara