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Come Close To Me - Quietus

Come close to me, dearest sweet love. Hum echoes in my dreams Let me hear your voice from above, Elated as love seems. Each night I feel your kiss, Darling, you are my bliss, Hold me tight dear like this. I care for thee, Come close to me. Quietus

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Date: 1/21/2023 10:20:00 AM
Hello Victor. This is a little gem not to mention quiet beautiful to be shared between two special people. Your words say everything in such a loving and feeling way. This touches any heart who reads this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I hope you are staying safe. I can't believe we are almost into February. Have a great and peaceful weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always.
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Date: 1/20/2023 3:20:00 PM
This is beautiful. Heartfelt and sincere, it reads with deepest love.
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Date: 1/20/2023 10:04:00 AM
Lovely words Victor, nostalgic and lovingly romantic… Belle
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Date: 1/18/2023 3:02:00 AM
Your love for your wife shines in your poetry, my friend. I have to admit I needed the dictionary for "quietus" Very nice!
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Date: 1/17/2023 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Victor. I hardly ever come across the word quietus nowadays. I remember reading it somewhere in Shakespeare many years ago! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/17/2023 7:51:00 AM
- Romantic and warm poem ... love it, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:22:00 AM
A blissful dream of love, Wonderful write Victor
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:09:00 AM
Beautifully romantic!
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:09:00 AM
Oh wow! Title should be the refrain though ~ Come close to me. Beautifully penned Victor! An outstanding Quietus
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Date: 1/17/2023 3:38:00 AM
Beautiful one, Victor, I do like this form very much:)
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Date: 1/16/2023 9:57:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful, and I can imagine, true as well. The depth of your love is undying, and precious Victor.
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:25:00 PM
Dear Victor, the sad beauty of your poem captures my soulful imagination. The mingling of love and grief and dreams so exquisitely and intimately expressed. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/16/2023 4:40:00 PM
Beautifully written Victor your heart is a passionate one my friend...
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Date: 1/16/2023 3:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful dream, best you don't want to awaken from it, Victor :)
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Date: 1/16/2023 2:08:00 PM
this is SO nice and I love the form too.
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Date: 1/16/2023 10:49:00 AM
Sad, yet beautiful, romantic reflections, from the still of the night. Blessings.
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Date: 1/16/2023 9:12:00 AM
Purely sublime Víctor, you evoke tender intimacy with your soulful words.
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Date: 1/16/2023 8:14:00 AM
Beautifully romantic Victor, when you finally awake you're in a happy mood for the rest of the day. Tom
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Date: 1/16/2023 7:10:00 AM
Victor, your writing is excellent. I felt both delight and sorrow when reading this moving poetry. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:24:00 AM
Our loved ones come to visit in our dreams. Well felt. hugs eve
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Victor. You shine in this form.
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Date: 1/16/2023 4:55:00 AM
Victor, a emotive poem with both grief and love, well penned.
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Date: 1/16/2023 3:17:00 AM
My mother would dream about my father after his passing and say it was like he was right there. I enjoyed reading your work passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2023 1:55:00 AM
Wow, so romantic ! She must be listening to your lyrical outbursts, dear Victor ...
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Date: 1/16/2023 1:45:00 AM
So simply sweet and lovely Victor! Debx
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