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Come Clean

Come clean even the wisest of us at least once has made wish to a star even the most skeptical has called to a god when feeling lost hopelessly adrift from a path of truth having strayed too far even those surest of love have felt a twitch of jealousy doubted in one's own gleams, too well knowing the attraction of younger and seemingly far brighter beams even an acclaimed writer has read other's marvelous verse thinking better works inconceivable no finer declarations achievable and wondered if poetry always a soaring soulful gift or as much a spirit sinking curse

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Date: 4/11/2023 4:01:00 AM
This is wonderful Joe, so very true, aal of it. I am catching up on everything I misses when my family was here. Glad I cought this one. It made me think of a few people i know. Best wishes
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/11/2023 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, Wen; I know, the holiday put me in the rears as well. Most important that you produce your own lovely work. Treasures for the world. Blessings.
Date: 4/1/2023 6:37:00 AM
Every stanza a brilliant observation on human mind. We do all those things knowingly or unknowingly. You are a wonderful poet and a deep thinker my friend.
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Date: 4/1/2023 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay; your comment has made my day far brighter. Blessings my friend.

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