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Colours of Love

With each step the beat of my heart rippled, like gentle vapours playing with tender waves. Her hands felt softer than Cherry blossom buds, entwined with mine, I felt no desire to let go. With each step, bird songs serenaded sweeter, my eyes yearning for this path to never end. Her timid smile released dormant sensations, electric sparks enticed my body, soul and mind. With each step, emotions connected deeper, all flaws now obsolete, no inhibitions remained. All was now transparent in our chosen province, endless enchanted hues painted a perfect portrait. My healed heart became a tenant for her love, for the first time, I knew it would remain safe.
Silent One Written 8 June 2016
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Salehi Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Beautifully expressed... Happy Holidays.
Juman Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Love, A great secret--Lovely my friend
Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Loving is giving! Love is receiving! Love is living! Love is healing! Colours of live! Unique and inspirational!
One Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Besma..
DiMino Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Such hesitance we have having touched the flame before, realizing how long such burns take to heal. The heart has many strengths, but certainly not asbestos. Great imagery and sense. Love it!
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Joe..
Williams Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Romance and Love paint beauty in colors more charming than nature. Not sure who quoted that. Your lovely poem sings a sweet serenades Si ending on a very positive note. Excellent choice of song...Maria
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Maria..
Duet Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:34 PM
So beautiful, ZZ. Love the ending...and love the song. You have a special way with love poetry.
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Carole...
White Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Love is more than a feeling and a four letter word,very beautifully defined soul connection.
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thanks Kelli..
Ashley Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Your poem ripples with the enchantment of a tender and romantic love Silent One. I especially love the last stanza, and then, especially the last two lines of your poem. Such an endearing and emotional sentiment.. Just beautiful!
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you Susan..
Hamilton Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:09 PM
When I saw the title I remembered this one, loved it as before, reminds me of the colour of love by Billy Ocean!
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:10 PM
I actually saw that song, when I was contemplating music for this one.. Thank you John..
Leiser Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Sweet romance budding with radiant promises! Such a tender and sensual pen, Silent! Beautiful :)
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Laura..
Smith Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Beautiful lines, beautifully composed and beautiful poetry!
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Ahh, I love the love birds in the picture. The poem is very romantic. enjoyed reading your work. If for a contest, reads like a very good contender. Thanks for the visit to my page. My husband is healing slowly but surely. Sara
Gentile Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:48 AM
There is no end to what love can do.. a beautiful romantic portrait, Happy Monday!!
Teagan Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:33 AM
So sweetly romantic.... beautiful description of falling in love again. Those who find this, knowing their heart will be safe, are very blessed.
S     Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Wow Silent One!!! A love on a deeper, soulmate level... healing and accepting. Just a magnificent romantic write. Love the song as well. ~ Judy
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 8:23 AM
A beautiful & romantic poem, S.O.... one wins poems in "my contest" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 7:44 AM
A most lovely song indeed...made it easy to read your tender poem...All the best SO
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Charming, colorful, romantic depiction of love..beautifully expressed Silent One.
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Vijay..
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