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With each step the beat of my heart rippled, like gentle vapours playing with tender waves. Her hands felt softer than Cherry blossom buds, entwined with mine, I felt no desire to let go. With each step, bird songs serenaded sweeter, my eyes yearning for this path to never end. Her timid smile released dormant sensations, electric sparks enticed my body, soul and mind. With each step, emotions connected deeper, all flaws now obsolete, no inhibitions remained. All was now transparent in our chosen province, endless enchanted hues painted a perfect portrait. My healed heart became a tenant for her love, for the first time, I knew it would remain safe.
Silent One Written 8 June 2016

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Date: 12/14/2018 10:37:00 PM
Beautifully expressed... Happy Holidays.
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Date: 7/24/2018 9:36:00 PM
Love, A great secret--Lovely my friend
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Date: 3/16/2018 5:47:00 AM
Loving is giving! Love is receiving! Love is living! Love is healing! Colours of live! Unique and inspirational!
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Silent One
Date: 3/16/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Besma..
Date: 2/27/2018 5:13:00 AM
Such hesitance we have having touched the flame before, realizing how long such burns take to heal. The heart has many strengths, but certainly not asbestos. Great imagery and sense. Love it!
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Joe..
Date: 2/13/2018 12:53:00 AM
Romance and Love paint beauty in colors more charming than nature. Not sure who quoted that. Your lovely poem sings a sweet serenades Si ending on a very positive note. Excellent choice of song...Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Maria..
Date: 2/12/2018 11:34:00 PM
So beautiful, ZZ. Love the ending...and love the song. You have a special way with love poetry.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Carole...
Date: 2/12/2018 10:11:00 PM
Love is more than a feeling and a four letter word,very beautifully defined soul connection.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Kelli..
Date: 2/12/2018 8:24:00 PM
Your poem ripples with the enchantment of a tender and romantic love Silent One. I especially love the last stanza, and then, especially the last two lines of your poem. Such an endearing and emotional sentiment.. Just beautiful!
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Susan..
Date: 2/12/2018 1:09:00 PM
When I saw the title I remembered this one, loved it as before, reminds me of the colour of love by Billy Ocean!
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Silent One
Date: 2/12/2018 1:10:00 PM
I actually saw that song, when I was contemplating music for this one.. Thank you John..
Date: 2/12/2018 12:50:00 PM
Sweet romance budding with radiant promises! Such a tender and sensual pen, Silent! Beautiful :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/12/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Laura..
Date: 2/12/2018 11:10:00 AM
Beautiful lines, beautifully composed and beautiful poetry!
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:48:00 AM
There is no end to what love can do.. a beautiful romantic portrait, Happy Monday!!
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:48:00 AM
Ahh, I love the love birds in the picture. The poem is very romantic. enjoyed reading your work. If for a contest, reads like a very good contender. Thanks for the visit to my page. My husband is healing slowly but surely. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:33:00 AM
So sweetly romantic.... beautiful description of falling in love again. Those who find this, knowing their heart will be safe, are very blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:31:00 AM
Wow Silent One!!! A love on a deeper, soulmate level... healing and accepting. Just a magnificent romantic write. Love the song as well. ~ Judy
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Date: 2/12/2018 8:23:00 AM
A beautiful & romantic poem, S.O.... one wins poems in "my contest" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 7:44:00 AM
A most lovely song indeed...made it easy to read your tender poem...All the best SO
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:26:00 AM
Charming, colorful, romantic depiction of love..beautifully expressed Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/12/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..

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