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Sunset celebrations ensue on the coast of Key West, bidding adieu to azure blue. Visitors travel here on a quest to see a sky by evening repossessed. Silky blonde strands caress the horizon as the sun begins its descent, the first sign day is done. Onlookers attend the miraculous event to see colours only heaven can present. With music and red wine revelers toast each dying day. Sailboats’ silhouettes cross the shoreline, dark profiles gently sway, a graceful ballet in nautical display. The South’s own aurora borealis unfolds with magenta, lavender and gold. Deepening rainbow hues capture dusk’s bliss as cameras click for memories to hold until day surrenders uncontrolled.
Written June 22, 2014 *There is a sundown celebration every day in Key West. Entertainers perform and people travel great distances to participate in the ritual.

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Date: 6/27/2014 6:20:00 AM
Well-deserved win. This is perhaps the best of the lot. Big congrats, dear Carolyn!!
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Date: 6/27/2014 12:05:00 AM
Quite a beauty of the sunset created and peaceful surrounding with music, congrats carolyn
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Date: 6/26/2014 9:59:00 PM
After reading this I think every place should have a sundown celebration. It must be a magnificent sunset to fuel such a wonderful poetic remembrance.
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Date: 6/26/2014 9:56:00 PM
Awesome Carolyn ! Such great n wonderful it must be ! Congrats on top place dear !
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:34:00 PM
Yours is one of the most beautiful on the winners list. Congrats!
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the wonderful win hugs Tim
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:21:00 PM
Very nicely written Carolyn...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/26/2014 5:40:00 PM
Hi Carolyn! Congratulations on a deserved top podium finish!! You captured the sunset celebrations with all its colourful beauty. merits a 7 rating. // paul
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Date: 6/26/2014 5:22:00 PM
beautiful poem Carolyn that set me on fire with it's imagery wonderful pen congrats on 1st place ty for entering hugs
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/28/2014 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elly. I have participated in the sundown celebration a few times and it truly is a wonderful way to end the day.
Date: 6/26/2014 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful write Carolyn! ....painted with a very fine brush, especially the last stanza... I have recollections of Florida again....:-) Love Always, Keith
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Date: 6/26/2014 10:12:00 AM
Oh I do recall those Key West Sunsets! BEAUTIFUL! There is a fairly unknown place called Honeymoon Island that was much closer to my home in Orlando. Only a 2 hour drive, By Sarasota and Tampa. NO HOTELS just a state park and lots of shells and wildlife. 3 bucks a carload. and Nobody goes there. It is worth the drive.
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Date: 6/26/2014 10:06:00 AM
I sure wish I woulda went to Key West for that which your Poetic Picture Paints, insteada' chasin' the Brave Bull Ghosts of Hemingway and getting waaaay too drunk during Fantasy Fest. Great Write!
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Date: 6/26/2014 2:51:00 AM
hope to travel to Key West one day and see the sunset as you beautifully described. Mohan PS: I could not enter your contest on Past Lives as it seems to have closed down as I was preparing to enter it with my poem. Anyway, I submitted my poem on the soup. Mohan
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/26/2014 8:13:00 PM
Carolyn, congrats for your lovely win. Also, today I have been able to enter your contest as the window popped up just for one entry again. Mohan
Date: 6/25/2014 5:12:00 PM
sounds wonderful - just love this, my friend
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:22:00 PM
Oh well done indeed Carolyn..' and what beauty there is in the world.! As I took this in I really was struck by the thought of why do people go to war when there is so much that can be enjoyed.? Maybe the vastness of the world challenges their sense of their value in the scheme of things.?.. Anyway this type of beauty will prevail..!
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Date: 6/25/2014 9:54:00 AM
I could feel the breeze while standing barefoot in the sand watching the ships sail.. A wonderful offering my friend. A pure delight to read!!!! BBBBravoooo!!!!! "Silky blonde strands caress the horizon as the sun begins its descent, the first sign day is done. Onlookers attend the miraculous event to see colours only heaven can present."
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Date: 6/24/2014 5:10:00 PM
Wow, The whole poem is wonderfully grand. I could see you with your artist brush swaying to the music that only God can provide for such a beautiful scene. Creating line after line the beauty of the sunset so vividly clear. So well done, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:28:00 PM
You communicate a wondercul vivacity in this poem Carolyn, your vision is somewhat anthropological, I like it. I admire how you passionately incorporated the Auroa Borealis, and a novel metaphor with the sail boats. A stimulating write. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/22/2014 11:54:00 PM
Sounds magnificent Carolyn....I have heard of fantasy fest around Halloween but not of this....I will put it on my to do list..Do you live nearby ? you could show me the sights////hugs Tim
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Date: 6/22/2014 6:56:00 PM
you got a lot of colors into this marvelous poem, Carolyn. I think that is so cool that the sundown celebration is ever single day. Is it every day for the summer season? Hard to imagine they can carry on with suc a hing every night of the week!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/22/2014 9:40:00 PM
Yes, the sundown celebration is every day. Perhaps they take a break on Christmas, but I doubt it. I've participated in the celebration in spring, summer, winter and fall.
Date: 6/22/2014 4:26:00 PM
haven't been to key west in awhile but the sky is beautiful,does this celebration take place on the summer solstice?
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Date: 6/22/2014 4:17:00 PM
Stunning poem with wonderful colours whirling through my mind! Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 6/22/2014 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful color display in words, Carolyn. Key West is so quaint; I love it.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/22/2014 4:17:00 PM
Yes, I love Key West, Faye. thanks for reading my poem.

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