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Fall Splendor - 8 to 16 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 09/14/2023

Walking on colourful leaves, fall brings back long sleeves. The lazy sun goes to bed early, while the morning fresh wind caresses the wet grass softly. A shiny happy moon greets the lark in the lagoon, beside the dense forest, where fall makes its best: a bright symphony of colours, for the eyes of this season lovers.

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Date: 9/30/2023 12:54:00 PM
Gorgeous Maria. Autumn seems to bring out the best in everything and everyone. Congratulations! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/1/2023 11:47:00 AM
Hot here in Texas as well, but I am hoping for a few cooler days before winter sets in.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/30/2023 1:27:00 PM
Hey Linda. Autumn here is too hot. This time of night we are sweating. Thank you Linda. Have a great weekend!
Date: 9/29/2023 2:12:00 PM
Maria, a sweet fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/30/2023 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania. Hugsxxxx
Date: 9/28/2023 11:19:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold Fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/29/2023 12:15:00 AM
Thank you Beata. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Blessings!
Date: 9/16/2023 4:41:00 AM
My friend, you painted us a wonderful picture with these very fine verses. A positive and beautiful new creation. A fav foe me. God bless you.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/16/2023 4:51:00 AM
Hello Robert. Thank you for making it Fav. I'm very happy you liked it and also for your lovely comment. Thank you. Blessings my friend. Have a wonderful wekend...!
Date: 9/14/2023 4:20:00 PM
An excellent entry for the contest, Maria. Your poetic words match the accompanying photo well, my friend. Your imagery in breathtaking. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/15/2023 12:24:00 AM
Hello Bill. Thank you for your words and wishes. Have a nice weekendxxx
Date: 9/14/2023 2:37:00 PM
Ah, Maria, a symphony of colours , Falls Colours..and all things associated with it! So true, for the new loves will enjoy, good point.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/15/2023 12:22:00 AM
Hello Anaya. Thank you so much. Have a nice dayxxx

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