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Fall Splendor - 8 to 16 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 09/14/2023

Walking on colourful leaves, fall brings back long sleeves. The lazy sun goes to bed early, while the morning fresh wind caresses the wet grass softly. A shiny happy moon greets the lark in the lagoon, beside the dense forest, where fall makes its best: a bright symphony of colours, for the eyes of this season lovers.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/30/2023 12:54:00 PM

Gorgeous Maria. Autumn seems to bring out the best in everything and everyone. Congratulations! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/1/2023 11:47:00 AM

Hot here in Texas as well, but I am hoping for a few cooler days before winter sets in.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/30/2023 1:27:00 PM

Hey Linda. Autumn here is too hot. This time of night we are sweating. Thank you Linda. Have a great weekend!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/29/2023 2:12:00 PM

Maria, a sweet fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/30/2023 12:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Tania. Hugsxxxx

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/28/2023 11:19:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold Fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/29/2023 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Beata. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Blessings!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/16/2023 4:41:00 AM

My friend, you painted us a wonderful picture with these very fine verses. A positive and beautiful new creation. A fav foe me. God bless you.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/16/2023 4:51:00 AM

Hello Robert. Thank you for making it Fav. I'm very happy you liked it and also for your lovely comment. Thank you. Blessings my friend. Have a wonderful wekend...!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 4:20:00 PM

An excellent entry for the contest, Maria. Your poetic words match the accompanying photo well, my friend. Your imagery in breathtaking. Good luck in the contest! Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/15/2023 12:24:00 AM

Hello Bill. Thank you for your words and wishes. Have a nice weekendxxx

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/14/2023 2:37:00 PM

Ah, Maria, a symphony of colours , Falls Colours..and all things associated with it! So true, for the new loves will enjoy, good point.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/15/2023 12:22:00 AM

Hello Anaya. Thank you so much. Have a nice dayxxx