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Fall Splendor - 8 to 16 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 09/14/2023

Colourful Fall

Walking on colourful leaves,
      fall brings back long sleeves.
    The lazy sun goes to bed early,
     while the morning fresh wind 
     caresses the wet grass softly.

            A shiny happy moon
     greets the lark in the lagoon,
         beside the dense forest,
         where fall makes its best:
    a bright symphony of colours,
  for the eyes of this season lovers.
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Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Gorgeous Maria. Autumn seems to bring out the best in everything and everyone. Congratulations! :)
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Hot here in Texas as well, but I am hoping for a few cooler days before winter sets in.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Hey Linda. Autumn here is too hot. This time of night we are sweating. Thank you Linda. Have a great weekend!
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Maria, a sweet fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Thank you so much Tania. Hugsxxxx
Agustin Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:19 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold Fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Thank you Beata. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Blessings!
Lindley Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 4:41 AM
My friend, you painted us a wonderful picture with these very fine verses. A positive and beautiful new creation. A fav foe me. God bless you.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Hello Robert. Thank you for making it Fav. I'm very happy you liked it and also for your lovely comment. Thank you. Blessings my friend. Have a wonderful wekend...!
Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:20 PM
An excellent entry for the contest, Maria. Your poetic words match the accompanying photo well, my friend. Your imagery in breathtaking. Good luck in the contest! Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Hello Bill. Thank you for your words and wishes. Have a nice weekendxxx
Anaya Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Ah, Maria, a symphony of colours , Falls Colours..and all things associated with it! So true, for the new loves will enjoy, good point.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:22 AM
Hello Anaya. Thank you so much. Have a nice dayxxx
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