Andrea Dietrich Poet Romanticism

Colourfication

As an aureolin daybreak streams through the window,
I waken to the face of my beloved in wisteria repose.
Long locks of charcoal hair, silver-streaked,
have fallen through the night across his tranquil face.
Tenderly I move them to the side, 
                                          then gently stroke his cheek.

His eyes flutter open, revealing bright turquoise.
Those amazing eyes probe the emerald depths of mine.
Then reaching out, he pulls me to his chest.
In his arms I am smooth magnolia 
                                         against his taut and sturdy trunk.

Next to his heart, I can hear its steadfast pulse begin to quicken.
Persimmon, our excitement blossoms. 
I taste his eager mouth and start to move my hips.
His lips and his fingers know my secret places and desires.
They travel, feather soft, along my body.
Fantastic will be the crescendo to our crimson climax
followed by the lingering in its aftermath
                                                               of fuchsia bliss.



Written March 12, 2016
Color shades used: for yellow/ aureolin; for purple/wisteria; for black/ charcoal;
for grey/ silver; for blue/ turquoise; for green/ emerald; for white/ magnolia; for 
orange/ persimmon; for red/ crimson; for pink/ fuchsia

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Anisha Dutta April 28, 2016 at 1:28 PM Congrats Andrea on colorful win

Tom Arnone April 23, 2016 at 4:02 PM Love this one, Andrea. Colorful, descriptive passion aplenty.... :-)

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2016 at 12:04 AM Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~

Vladislav Raven March 22, 2016 at 5:46 PM Hi Andrea, Your words sing out the colours that swim within your sensual piece painting such sensual visions in the mind. This one had to be a winner a winner Andrea. This is an excellent work Andrea. It sings so easily into the Psyche. Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea....MKE. A seven and a fave on this wonderful write.

Connie Marcum Wong March 21, 2016 at 7:22 PM Congratulations on your high placement Andrea! I knew this one would rate high! ;)

Jan Allison March 17, 2016 at 3:56 PM mmm I was hooked about the locks with silver streaks lol - what a wonderful sensual poem my friend! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7

Anindya Mohan Tagore March 16, 2016 at 10:31 PM Hmmm, no comments. Soyez gentille... LOL! Lest of Buck, Hove and Lugs, Bobby

Sara Kendrick March 15, 2016 at 5:09 PM Creative and colorful work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Constance La France March 15, 2016 at 4:22 PM Andrea, you naughty girl, oh this was deliciously hot and oh so colourful, an absolute winner, 7 ~

Daniel Turner March 15, 2016 at 7:35 AM Whew! Pretty hot stuff here, Andrea. Colorful, indeed! Really sensual and romantically revealing. Good luck in contest. Peace dear lady:)

James Inman March 15, 2016 at 6:12 AM Great write Andrea, sensual and beautiful. I had to tone mine down a bit.

Timothy Hicks March 14, 2016 at 11:09 PM Beautiful exoneration of colors with tantalizing images ... flows so naturally. The crescendo to our crimson climax .... I think SO will like that line. He likes original pairing.

Michael Tor March 14, 2016 at 1:41 PM Beautiful write bringing those majestic colors alive. A wonderful entry Andrea...

Sam Jameson March 14, 2016 at 10:49 AM Excellent work, Andrea-- I love the balance of tenderness and seduction, spot on. Nicely penned, and obviously great use of the colors to emphasize the theme--I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest!