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Colour of My Heart

Now brown, the once-blue brook meanders down
To dams where sludge has chased beavers away
As species die, our Mother casts a frown
For Nature can’t control man or his way

From fracking, tapping minerals, she groans
She coughs, red lava spews from Mother’s pores
With waste-clogged arteries, she weeps and moans
The very sight of man she now abhors

As Nature inhales toxins, man’s forewarned
Her colors change from purity to rage
Depleting ozone, Earth has now been warmed
Tsunamis, hurricanes take center stage

We shed our tears, entrapped by urban sprawl
But Mother turns her head and lets them fall



*December 5, 2018
Written for John Hamilton’s “Colour of My Heart” Contest
Inspired by “Colors of the Wind” from the movie “Pocahontas”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Horsman Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 1:11 AM
Roaming through my favourites list, i know you are there a plenty,,see you again soon...just love this. Stay Safe.
Raven Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Hi Carolyn, what are we doing to our world, destroying it piece by ever sorrowful piece. This is an excellent write with such sorrowful, yet strong images. Such sadness always touches me when I see the damage we do. Sorrow and anger sing from your pen as mother nature lets her anger take sway. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX This one is a fave carolyn.
Hamilton Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Nice to see this as the number 2 best new poem, getting more worthy accolades, makes me feel good! Way to go Carolyn!!
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 12:31 PM
I didn't know, John. Thanks for telling me.
Cozart Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Mother Nature weeps for us...Congrats on your win Carolyn
Rose  Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Mother nature is rejoicing at your empathetic plea for her. congratulations on your win dear Carolyn. we ought to treat her with best of kindness, if she is to endure she needs our TLC, Thanks for sharing dear lady xo
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:58 PM
I remember this one. He chose very well because your imagery and the way you responded to the theme are very good! Congrats, dear.
Johnson Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Congrats. Well written. Well said. I hear you clearly. Hope everyone does. Blessings my friend.
Devonshire Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Curtis. The future of our planet is at stake, so I hope people are listening and seeing the warning signs.
Watson Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations,Carolyn. This was a beautiful, thought-provoking poem.
Garcia Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 2:45 PM
OMG. This is a sonnet as it should be. Very well done. Congrats on the placement for this masterpiece.
Gondolf Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Carolyn, back to say congrats once again for your win in John's contest. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Carolyn, I am so happy to see this beautiful rich poem honored with a top win. I don't see my comment here and I know I read it because I remember loving it! I am faving it! I wish I could write as wonderfully as this. Congratulations my friend! xxoo : )
Devonshire Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thanks, Connie. I was sure I'd left a comment on Dear Heart's poem, but it had disappeared too. No worries. Was delighted to see your poem on the winners' list.
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Congrats Carolyn on a stirring write, just what I was hoping for, you delivered in a big way, congrats on a top win in my premium contest!
Devonshire Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, John. You provided a topic dear to my heart.
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Awesome poem Carolyn. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
Rushing Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 5:44 PM
A wonderfully written sonnet Carolyn and congratulations on your win! Have a lovely evening my friend.
Gondolf Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Carolyn, congrats on your win for this wonderfully written sonnet. John
Devonshire Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, John.
Rose  Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 6:02 AM
The color of mother natures heart is so that we could bathe in it or drown, its really up to us to make the differential mode. Thank you for sharing, and have a wonderful day dear poet.
Sheehan Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Excellent Sonnet. Fantastic imagery. It rings of truth.
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Mitra Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:48 PM
This write is a gem...all the best for a top win..so well written..the heart of mother Earth seems to be bleeding
Devonshire Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 9:49 AM
The increasing occurrence of natural disasters seems to be warning us. Thanks for reading, Debjani.
La France Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Carolyn, excellent writing, I admire where you took this theme, it is so sad to see nature being destroyed before our eyes, it seems too late to turn it around ~
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Wow, Carolyn, A pen of an Eco Warrior, superb poetry. Or A Mission statement on the state of the planet,,,Truly powerful, got to go to my Fav...
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 1:49 PM
We can't expect to keep doing harm without incurring consequences, Harry. This is a concern I've had for decades. Thanks for reading, my friend.
Laurie Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:42 PM
G'day Caroline … a very impressive sonnet that suits a quote on man's greed - none so blind as those who will not see - enjoyed - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:05 PM
man has so much to answer for Carolyn no wonder the earth sobs acid rain tears:-( hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 5:47 PM
wow, Carolyn I am impressed by your poems I am seeing lately. You are writing very intelligently on topics like this one and with great rhyme.
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Thanks, Andrea, your comments mean a lot.
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