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Colors of Pumpkin

colors of pumpkin, vermillion and deep gold--- veiled mysteries air branches intertwine in a sea of canopies--- harvest moon rises gilded by the dawn and swayed by a seasoned wind--- shades of art abound

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/2/2013 1:29:00 AM

Gorgeous trio of Haikus: Sorry I have been busy these last few months...hope to catch up with you in January. Big hugs, SuZ

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/22/2012 8:42:00 PM

Masterpieces! Thank you for the colors and images. Really suit the Haiku spirit! Thanks for inspiring. Love, Hanitra

Len Gasun

Date: 10/21/2012 8:47:00 PM

This is a very fascinating poem I've missed from one of my favorite poets! Thank you so much for sharing. love, Leonora

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/22/2012 6:53:00 PM

Gotcha Connie, it's about color not things right?! I gather these creations are haiku, Beautifully done my friend! Love,Lizzie

Jack Horne

Date: 8/6/2012 9:22:00 AM

just love these haiku, Connie - I've only ever seen pumpkins at Halloween over here

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/6/2012 2:53:00 PM

I was speaking of autumn in my first haiku. Guess I veiled it a bit too much. I used pumpkin as one of the autumn colors. Thanks so much for your comment Jack. I think Owen thought I was speaking of pumpkins too.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/19/2012 11:46:00 AM

Beautiful haiku series, Connie...perfect 5-7-5 syllable count which is how I try to write them...love the alliteration as well...have a wonderful day - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2012 11:05:00 PM

Connie, thanks for your wonderful words on the bird sonnet. I think you are able to read "about poem" by clicking above my poem on that part. I just added a little comment about the bird that inspired that poem and I hope you will read it. It is something I really enjoy seeing every time I come home from work recently! About the soupmail you sent me, I agree with you!! (you can see my comment at the blog)

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

Good work - and you stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2012 12:51:00 PM

Like this one Connie, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2012 9:37:00 PM

Connie, now this is what I call metaphorical haiku. The type that our mutual friends would not accept as haiku. but i tell you what. THESE ROCK!!! I especially love the middle one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2012 12:13:00 PM

Very descriptive and creative Haiku..It soon will be pumpkin time but now with the heat of summer it doesn't seem it will ever be cool again..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2012 9:44:00 AM

such a pretty scene you have crafted here with your beautiful words, connie... string of 'kus deserving re-reads..:) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 7/16/2012 7:12:00 AM

Hi Connie, great set of haiku's, nice picture you have painted, I like them...David

Michael Smith

Date: 7/16/2012 6:30:00 AM

I enjoyed this very muuch. Thanks for your comments . I'll be back to read more.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 4:45:00 AM

Good morning Connie, the image is vivid, like the endings of late October and early November... enjoyed all 3 wonderful haikus.. always~pd