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We walk, hand in hand, surrounded by green where breeze through the trees makes color serene. We stop for a while; you give me a kiss as sun's mellow yellow radiates bliss. Resuming our stroll, some flowers we see. They are the colors of felicity - A rainbow of hues from bright orange to rosy and pink, then to purple and blue. All nature around, those colors of spring, reflect the sweet love that makes my heart sing. And beautiful blue is the heaven above - just one of the many colors of love.

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Date: 9/23/2016 8:05:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea !
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Date: 9/20/2016 8:39:00 PM
Andrea, I loved this Color of Love contest last year and actually remember this one! loved it :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea,.... love this one! ...Fran
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:06:00 PM
Lovely colors of love...so romantic! Congrats :)
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Date: 7/9/2016 7:37:00 AM
Hi Andrea: You deeply epitomize the feeling of love walking among the flowers . Great poem!
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Date: 7/7/2016 7:14:00 PM
Very nice poem
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Date: 6/13/2016 7:14:00 PM
Nice and sweet. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/13/2016 5:43:00 AM
A perfect ending to a perfect poem Andrea! The colors of love! Congratulations on your win. I will have to look at the list to see how you placed. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:28:00 AM
This made me smile, sis. Also I was wanting to sing it.
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:28:00 PM
Andrea, beautifully expressed lady...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/11/2016 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:57:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! Lovely write!
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Date: 6/10/2016 5:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on thirteenth place at your beautiful poem, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:45:00 PM
Wonderfully painted! A rainbows of words to enjoy! :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:23:00 PM
Rainbow colors strung into a poem beautifully!Loved it Andrea!
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Date: 6/10/2016 3:52:00 AM
Nice " safe" write Andrea, perhaps a little more involvement with the colours would open the poem up and give it a " feeling" of vibrancy, ..3rd line is missing a word I feel, " you give me A kiss" ? ...good luck ...Ian
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 7:00:00 PM
it just wasn't in me . I actually sat for 20 min and could not write a thing so went with what I did. Which took another 40 min.
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ANTHONY MARK
Date: 6/10/2016 5:34:00 PM
Fair point, but 18 people commented before me and not one mentioned the typo, ...? I don't buy that that you are unable to " feel" the colours in Casarah's pic prompt, ...you are an accomplished writer, who I have admired from the day I arrived, ...and should be able to blow her contest out the water.....using any number of devices and forms that lesser writers dream of mastering...xx Ian
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 9:20:00 AM
Some topics just sing to us, like the five word challenge tim gave us or the cemetery challenge we got from Broken Wings. Those, for example, are the ones of mine you might want to check out. Of course, more than half my poetry is going to seem safe to you , especially those in which I had to write from a picture I saw in a contest or on topics that normally would not occur to me. WE can only go so far with certain topics (at least that is how it is for me)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 9:13:00 AM
that was a typo that I forgot the word "a" so thanks for pointing that out to me. Lines are limited for this poem. My time is limited too, so this was all I could come up with in the time I had to work on it.
Date: 6/9/2016 10:06:00 PM
Really lovely, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:37:00 PM
So romantic and tender that makes one fall in love dear, Andrea! Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 6/9/2016 11:28:00 AM
A very colorful message indeed. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:26:00 AM
A joy to read, best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:50:00 AM
Beautifully written, Andrea. Love it. A7. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:45:00 AM
- Lovely romantic and your colors shine like a rainbow, Andrea - 7 - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:20:00 AM
You captured the "moment" of love, with all its color and excitement in this piece. Each line is crafted beautifully. I think? - a winner! ...Fran
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:43:00 AM
I love these colours of your lovely poem, Andrea:) "All nature around, those colors of spring, reflect the sweet love that makes my heart sing." - Excellent lines:)
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