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We walk, hand in hand, surrounded by green where breeze through the trees makes color serene. We stop for a while; you give me a kiss as sun's mellow yellow radiates bliss. Resuming our stroll, some flowers we see. They are the colors of felicity - A rainbow of hues from bright orange to rosy and pink, then to purple and blue. All nature around, those colors of spring, reflect the sweet love that makes my heart sing. And beautiful blue is the heaven above - just one of the many colors of love.

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Tanis Troutman

Date: 9/23/2016 8:05:00 PM

Beautiful write Andrea !

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 8:39:00 PM

Andrea, I loved this Color of Love contest last year and actually remember this one! loved it :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/19/2016 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea,.... love this one! ...Fran

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/19/2016 1:06:00 PM

Lovely colors of love...so romantic! Congrats :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/9/2016 7:37:00 AM

Hi Andrea: You deeply epitomize the feeling of love walking among the flowers . Great poem!

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/7/2016 7:14:00 PM

Very nice poem

Brandon Carter

Date: 6/13/2016 7:14:00 PM

Nice and sweet. I enjoyed it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2016 5:43:00 AM

A perfect ending to a perfect poem Andrea! The colors of love! Congratulations on your win. I will have to look at the list to see how you placed. Cheers, Connie

Jennifer Walker

Date: 6/13/2016 12:28:00 AM

This made me smile, sis. Also I was wanting to sing it.

Lu Loo

Date: 6/11/2016 1:28:00 PM

Andrea, beautifully expressed lady...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2016 5:34:00 AM

Beautiful poem Andrea...Congrats on your win...

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/10/2016 6:57:00 PM

Congrats Andrea! Lovely write!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2016 5:07:00 PM

- Congratulations on thirteenth place at your beautiful poem, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/10/2016 4:54:00 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/10/2016 4:45:00 PM

Wonderfully painted! A rainbows of words to enjoy! :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/10/2016 4:23:00 PM

Rainbow colors strung into a poem beautifully!Loved it Andrea!

Anthony Mark

Date: 6/10/2016 3:52:00 AM

Nice " safe" write Andrea, perhaps a little more involvement with the colours would open the poem up and give it a " feeling" of vibrancy, ..3rd line is missing a word I feel, " you give me A kiss" ? ...good luck ...Ian

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 7:00:00 PM

it just wasn't in me . I actually sat for 20 min and could not write a thing so went with what I did. Which took another 40 min.

Anthony Mark
Date: 6/10/2016 5:34:00 PM

Fair point, but 18 people commented before me and not one mentioned the typo, ...? I don't buy that that you are unable to " feel" the colours in Casarah's pic prompt, ...you are an accomplished writer, who I have admired from the day I arrived, ...and should be able to blow her contest out the water.....using any number of devices and forms that lesser writers dream of mastering...xx Ian

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 9:20:00 AM

Some topics just sing to us, like the five word challenge tim gave us or the cemetery challenge we got from Broken Wings. Those, for example, are the ones of mine you might want to check out. Of course, more than half my poetry is going to seem safe to you , especially those in which I had to write from a picture I saw in a contest or on topics that normally would not occur to me. WE can only go so far with certain topics (at least that is how it is for me)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2016 9:13:00 AM

that was a typo that I forgot the word "a" so thanks for pointing that out to me. Lines are limited for this poem. My time is limited too, so this was all I could come up with in the time I had to work on it.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/9/2016 10:06:00 PM

Really lovely, Andrea! Janice

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/9/2016 4:37:00 PM

So romantic and tender that makes one fall in love dear, Andrea! Good luck and a seven!

Daver Austin

Date: 6/9/2016 11:28:00 AM

A very colorful message indeed. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/9/2016 8:26:00 AM

A joy to read, best of luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2016 7:45:00 AM

- Lovely romantic and your colors shine like a rainbow, Andrea - 7 - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 6/9/2016 7:20:00 AM

You captured the "moment" of love, with all its color and excitement in this piece. Each line is crafted beautifully. I think? - a winner! ...Fran

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/9/2016 3:43:00 AM

I love these colours of your lovely poem, Andrea:) "All nature around, those colors of spring, reflect the sweet love that makes my heart sing." - Excellent lines:)

Constance La France

Date: 6/8/2016 11:45:00 PM

Andrea, love your colors of love, 7 ~