Colors

Colors

Here they  are,   in no particular order
follow  no protocol  of precedence
the colorful  patterns  of the  mindscape
the planes of its sensitivity,  the 
triangles of its premises, the
circles of its surmises. Their reds too 
coagulate  in blood,  they ruffle  in
the form  of  blues,  could be black or white on
purpose or green in a teen . Don’t confuse
them with  the colors you perceive or the
lab- reconstructs-in- color of dinosaurs
or the latest of them,  lycopod . 
Mere caricatures, these are, which exist,
without dispute, within  your eyes too.

14  April 14,    Form:  sonnet
** The reference  here is to the recent  digital  life-like reconstruction of a long-extinct species of lycopods into its FULL-COLOR image based on a 400 million year old fossil- lycopod.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/10/2014 8:39:00 PM
congratulations very beautifully crafted piece
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Date: 6/27/2014 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved great win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:56:00 PM
Interesting side note you put with this poem. Congrats on your win. It's a very original piece.
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:45:00 PM
colorful patterns of mindscape, colours are, very well written and congrats for the win, Jagathsimhan. Mohan
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Date: 6/23/2014 12:18:00 PM
hi jaggy, I saw your message but I can't reply, my soup mail isn't working, I'm not at all well at the moment..xoxo
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Great work..Very unique and creative use of information..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/22/2014 4:32:00 PM
I have missed your interaction! This verse could just as easily be about people? I don't know what happened to our about the poem? You could have posted the pic there! Now I must google! LOL I have a friend our age or older who is a botanist & an artist who paints plant drawing you two should talk! Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/22/2014 4:34:00 PM
hmmm we used to pull them up and use them to make Christmas wreaths!!
Date: 4/30/2014 11:30:00 PM
jag!.. nice to read you again!. come visit and congrats in your win!,, huggs
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Date: 4/30/2014 10:29:00 AM
lovely win SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2014 5:01:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem, nair
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:31:00 AM
Awesome win Jag, xox..PD
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 4/26/2014 3:45:00 AM
Thank you, Linda..
Date: 4/25/2014 11:42:00 PM
Very different mesmerising take on the subject Nair ! Great poem n a great win, congrats !
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:29:00 PM
This is really well suited for a contest of Charlotte. Very unique imagery, Jag. Big congrats to you for your win!!
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:47:00 PM
Congrats..I leaned something too! BG
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Date: 4/25/2014 4:49:00 PM
Very cool I love learning new things, how's your submitting going? We haven't spoken in too long. congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:43:00 PM
Nice Jag... Congratulations on placing second in the contest... A job well done... Verlena
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:28:00 PM
a superb piece, jaggy, great attention to detail and very original, as your poems invariably are (I couldn't read this as a sonnet, to me it reads more like free verse...well maybe it's a futuristic sonnet, they do say aquarians are fifty years ahead of everyone else!) congrats on your win in my contest sweetie xoxo
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Date: 4/19/2014 3:42:00 AM
Jag, you well departed this very well via poetry... Well done... Verlena
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