Deb Wilson Poet Rhyme

Colors

This palette of life
Is glowing
Shiny bright colors
Are flowing
Painting the sun
Shadow play
Whispers of gold
Silver gray
Fire-blazing red
A lit fuse
Into the night
Starlight hues
Daylight changes
Lemon fields
Wildflower tints
Emerald yields
A shred of pale
Angel white
Completes the spin
Upon the light



written 1/13/2011

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Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 10:57 AM Deb, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos June 27, 2014 at 11:29 AM Dazzling with colors, this is a beautiful, creative write that I love. Congratulations on a great win! Warmest regards.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 27, 2014 at 7:00 AM A good one, congrats!

Judy Konos June 27, 2014 at 6:43 AM Perfect

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2014 at 8:42 PM It's so nice how you did this like paints in a palette, a "spin upon the light" Congrats for your win, Deb.

Mohan Chutani June 26, 2014 at 8:22 PM Lovely, free flowing poem on colors, Deb. Congrats for the win. Mohan

Shadow Hamilton June 26, 2014 at 5:35 PM very impressive poem full of colour Deb superb pen congrats on 2nd place and ty for taking part hugs

Robert Pettit January 16, 2011 at 9:42 AM Simply worded and easy to read while conveying vivid descriptiveness. This is an impressive presentation.

James Fraser January 16, 2011 at 3:29 AM One thing nature does display, is the beautiful array of natural colours. Us humans can only copy them. Beautifully said Deb....:)

Poet Destroyer A January 13, 2011 at 8:45 AM beautiful write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

Stephen Parker January 13, 2011 at 7:20 AM A colorful panopoly. A careening, meandering stream of color! Your satiating hues brighten the mundane sphere!

Barbara Gorelick January 13, 2011 at 6:32 AM Such a great use of colors to paint a picture. Very nice. BG

Eiken Laan January 13, 2011 at 5:57 AM Simply beautiful Deb:)) Makes me want to paint right now!

Nick Bagnall January 13, 2011 at 5:12 AM You've pretty much built yourself a rainbow there ! A very pleasant and colourful poem, which I've enjoyed more with each reading