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Colorless, Naked and Numb

this cooler air seems to mottle the trees spinning leaves like my thoughts in winded dance befalling trails of tears on crimson breeze as they fall grounded beneath the oak's stance i hear the crumble of death beneath me as i shiver within its strident gasp chaotic roots reach out beneath its quay piquing me with tones of your final rasp dubious mind much like bare branches snaps within the disdain utter from dead lips as it echoes remorse in lifeless slaps freeing only my body from its grips my soul stands colorless, naked and numb mirroring the trees in this autumn glum December 27, 2019 Entered into Best Sonnet of 2019 Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton September 30, 2019 *Quay is pronounced as Ke

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 1/5/2020 7:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win!!Beautiful as always!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thank you so very much Krish.... hugs

Jc Hawkens

Date: 1/3/2020 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win. As always. You've painted this canvas beautifully with your words.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/3/2020 11:19:00 AM

Thank you so much JC for your kind words... hugs :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/2/2020 11:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/3/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/2/2020 12:00:00 PM

Congratulation my friend on your top finish in this contest. I loved this poem the first time I read it and again just now. Amazing Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/2/2020 5:02:00 PM

Thank you so very much Chris.... i think this is my best sonnet... well regular one... they are much easier than the italian ones... hugs :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/1/2020 8:10:00 PM

You preformed this form gorgeously! Poetic hugs and congrats!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thank you so much... trying to work on these forms...i still struggle in some of them... hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 1/1/2020 1:54:00 PM

great sonnet sweet Sandy! I am so happy for you :) Happy New Year to yo and yours. Hugs from across the miles...x:-)-luloo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... Happy New Year to you...hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/1/2020 1:12:00 PM

You know how much I love this poem, congrats Sandy worthy of a shared best sonnet 2019!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 7:57:00 PM

Thank you so much John... I didn't have many sonnets to choose from...and this is my best to date... :) Happy New Year.... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 9:10:00 AM

I knew this one would be at the top. Beautifully done my friend. Congrats on your first place win

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/9/2019 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words..I appreciate you my friend :) hugs

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 10/8/2019 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win! A very cold view of autumn with wonderful images and as required no colour celebration.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much DW, i dislike autumn, it brings death to the trees and grass, and everything is colorless and bare...then the winter bite comes....

Craig Cornish

Date: 10/8/2019 7:12:00 AM

Your mind works magical analogies and your pen brings them to life.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Craig...my mind never stops churning thoughts...as a child when i was hurting, the beauty of nature was my comfort...i think i learned how to make emotions blend into the beauty at an early age... hugs :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/8/2019 12:45:00 AM

This is fabulous and so unique Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first placement! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/6/2019 9:02:00 PM

Yay... You won... Congratulations and love to you, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...hugs and blessings :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/6/2019 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations for your top win Sandra! :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/6/2019 4:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 10/6/2019 1:34:00 PM

Another amazing write Sandy, you made it to the top again, you know what I like!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/6/2019 1:56:00 PM

wow thank you John, I am honored to be on the podium with talent like Greg... thank you so much for hosting another wonderful contest and a great win....your topics always speak to me, and you write melancholy like me, i think we could do a great collaboration too... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2019 6:42:00 AM

Excellent my friend--emotive at its best --enjoyed the read..this has to win at the TOP.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, your vote of confidence and kind comments always brighten the day... hugs :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/1/2019 3:36:00 AM

dubious mind like bare branches snaps/ within the disdain utter from dead lips/// beautiful poetic expression

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Mahtab :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/30/2019 10:37:00 PM

Wonderful writing... Love it. God Bless you and I hope you win

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Regina, what a sweet thing to say... God bless you :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 9/30/2019 10:28:00 PM

Lifeless limbs on both of you... you depicted that so well ~ hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much HT...i struggle with forms like this one :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/30/2019 5:18:00 PM

Perfect. The somber feelings your poem expressed flow sadly like the dark dreary days of autumn. This poem reads in slow motion, it's cadence is smooth and easy but it's thought languish in the shadows of that old oak losing it's dressing for the rest of the year. If this was suppose to have us longing for springtime, it surely did the trick. Beautifully done my friend. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/30/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you my friend, your words lifted my spirits...though october is my time of birth, this time of year to me signifies death...the flowers, trees and grass will all be colorless and bare...i am already longing for spring... hugs :)