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Swap Quatrain 27th August 2023

Her slender little form adorned in smoky grey. She was very quiet, never had much to say. Friendly and sweet, her personality quite warm. Adorned in smoky grey, her slender little form. She was fairly shy, rather mousy I would say. She had no friends though they worked with her all day. Her one-word answers to their question made them sigh. Rather mousy I would say, she was fairly shy. No one really knew, she was quite the introvert. Timid and so sensitive, she was susceptible to hurt. Watching them so friendly, she wished for friends too. She was quite the introvert, no one really knew. The workday complete she would go home by train. She wouldn’t be home long, and she would go out again. A new set of clothes, no grey from her head to her feet. She would go home by train, the workday complete. At the club she was well known, her clothes outrageous. Dancing until morning, been doing this for ages. Happiness and laughter, her excitement well shown. Her clothes, outrageous, at the club she was well known. She just loved to be seen, she was so outgoing. With the splendor of her colorful clothes, she was glowing. Wearing colors of the rainbow, she was the Color Queen. She was so outgoing, she just loved to be seen.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:24:00 PM

Speaks, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the image too, Constance

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/11/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Constance, the choices you offer for your contest are first class. Always something to trigger imagination and skilled writing. Your contest attract some very very heavy competition. Especially now with a wonderful new wave of talented poets coming on board to Soup. Best wishes from SV

Ink Empress

Date: 9/4/2023 10:09:00 PM

Wearing colors of the rainbow! Whoa i absolutely love this write. So creative and artistic. Brilliant write that deserves to be read by many. Congratulations well deserved win

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 11:39:00 PM

My single talent (if you could call it that) is writing stories in rhyme. No wonderful descriptive passages or profound genius-like statements, but sometime I write a decent story. Thanks so much for your lovely comment Ink What do people call you ? Ink or I E or Inkie. I never know.. Cheers.

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/28/2023 9:45:00 AM

I love this quatrain- flows beautifully and so well written. Full of not just references to colour but your own vibrant talent . I love your style of writing. The last concluding stanza is wonderful.Thank you for sharing not just your poetry but yourself too. You have a generous soul SV. Blessings to you.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 7:28:00 PM

Christina, I cant thank you enough for your amazing comment. It has given me such an uplifting feeling. I am still smiling. Again thank you, please accept my very best wishes. SV

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/28/2023 4:18:00 AM

This is brilliant, with so much originality and creativity. I love it so! A fave. God bless you. Love, Gina

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 5:07:00 AM

Wow that is such a compliment coming from a poet such as yourself Gina. Thank you so much.

Silent One

Date: 8/28/2023 2:54:00 AM

Great rhymes and flow to your poem dear poet... You describe her very well, so well that you did not need that image.. your choice of words add to the poetic nature of this poem and really create an image of the character you are portraying... another great write.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 5:09:00 AM

I am humbled by such praise for this poem. Thank you so much. Your encouragement is really appreciated.

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2023 8:28:00 PM

You have accomplished a marvelous job. Writing a Swap Quatrain is not all that easy. But you have given life through this poetic form to a seemingly introvert girl who loved to wear colorful attire. I have no doubt this will be placed high ! Best of luck dear SV.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 5:15:00 AM

I am concerned that I did not pay enough attention to the word colorful Valsa. However I did not want to flood the poem, I endeavored to intimate that the colorful clothes were what brought her confidence out. Not sure if I achieved that. As always dear friend, thank you for your uplifting comments.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2023 7:23:00 PM

Your writing, SV, is a breathtaking work of art. It bursts with an array of vibrant hues, effortlessly igniting the imagination. Each description is so vivid and captivating as if one is transported into a mesmerizing world of dazzling rainbows. The presentation of your ideas is truly awe-inspiring, leaving readers spellbound. The imagery you craft and the metaphors you employ are extraordinary. Best of luck in the contest!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/28/2023 5:16:00 AM

I have said it before SP, your comments are the wind beneath my wings, as I try to live up to the praise you offer. I am indebted. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2023 1:09:00 PM

- The modern Cinderella ... a wonderful and colorful poem, S.V. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/27/2023 6:31:00 PM

Yup she even wore technicolor glass slippers :) Thanks for your lovely comment Anne-Lise.

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/27/2023 12:39:00 PM

She really shined on the other side, letting go of all inhibitions Many of us I believe can relate, S.V. as clubbing is a big part of our lives ! Love it, a difficult form, done well, perfect t contrast.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/28/2023 7:57:00 AM

The picture is fabulous, with or without it, the poetry is brilliant! We girls can relate, I say nonfiction for most of us!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/27/2023 6:34:00 PM

Thanks lovely, seeing the Judge wont see the picture. I am not sure this one would be up with a chance but its fun writing ones like this. I don't have to write "fiction" do you think ?