Notes About The Poem

- Color the Day -

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                                               O   
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                                        Fills a cup with words
                                        none are olive-sized   )))    
                                       - nor too tremendous      ))
                                       Drink it every morning        ))
                                         before the sun rises             ))
                                                                                    ))
                                       Fills my cup with colors         ))
                                       some are as lemonade       ))
                                        - poignant sweetness  ))))
                                   deeper tones indicate mystery
                                         A color drama with
                                          positive energies






01.06.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Number 1220 contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

4th place in the contest
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Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 11:03 AM
This so good Anne-Lise. Perfect shape and perfect poetic words to with them! Congratulations on your win! Off to get a cup of something delicious.
George Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 5:03 AM
Very creative and artistic. What an exquisite blend of colors in your picture and what beautiful imagery in your poem ! Well done dear friend. Congratulations on your win. Hugs :)
Rolland Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 12:40 AM
very delicate and imaginative, i enjoyed reading "on sunday" " have a nice day
Baker Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Fun shape poem for the contest, Anne-Lise. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Romios Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations! This is terrific! Pangie Xx
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise. I really enjoy your stunningly beautiful and creative poem.
Richards Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Very creative. Congratulations, Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Anne-Lise, I love your creative poem and congratulations on your contest win !
Rose  Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 5:15 PM
that looks so so refreshing Anne :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 12:47 PM
An uplifting drink to start the day you'll have to send me the recipe. An enjoyable read Anne-Lise. Tom
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 1:00 PM
- I think you posted the recipe today ... windy but a colorful day in my life, Tom :) - hugs
Y. Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is a well-written colorful write. The flowers, and color-packed drinks of delight, are just gorgeous. Thanks for sharing this lovely write. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- A poem for fun, Alexis ... many thanks for the lovely comment - Have a nice day, you too :) - hugs
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