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Color of My Heart

As you wander through the dawning daylight casting out the shadows off nights own shore you may observe her nature's creed in flight look but don't touch, she'll love you all the more if you find a deer panting by the lake or spot a rabbit as he scurries by proceed to enjoy the gift of daybreak observe it from afar, the El Shaddai when finally you spot her, by the sea the wisp of blond the glint of amber eye that linen dress that lifts in windy spree inhale the perfume of her being, sigh Don't clip her wings, or she will surely cave just give her love and be a faithful stave . December 9, 2018

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Date: 12/13/2018 3:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your take on the theme, Pixie and the way that the animals in passing brought it to life.
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Date: 12/13/2018 2:12:00 PM
How beautifully you convey how God is the all-sufficient, all-bountiful El Shaddai Vie. Congratulations on your deserving top win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/13/2018 1:18:00 PM
We are well advised to view nature from afar and revel in its beauty while we still have a chance. Beautifully written, Pixie Dust! Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/10/2018 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this wonderfully penned sonnet, Pixie. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:33:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Pixie :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2018 11:36:00 PM
This is beautifully written poem. I admit when I read lovely poetry I am often at a loss for words, what poetry should be!
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Date: 12/9/2018 5:37:00 PM
Beautifully penned PD.
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Date: 12/9/2018 4:09:00 PM
pixie.. i am overwhelmed and like simon cowell would say, you get lots of yesses from me... very nice!... huggs
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Date: 12/9/2018 11:00:00 AM
Such s beautiful heart..
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Date: 12/9/2018 9:46:00 AM
Very nicely done...imagery rocked and meaning was delicately given.
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Date: 12/9/2018 9:34:00 AM
I enjoyed the breathtaking essence of your poem, Pixie. Beautiful poetry of appreciation that I surely appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/9/2018 8:24:00 AM
Your words reverberate in this magnificent creation...so well done, Pixie! I saved it as a FAVE.
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