Audrey Haick Poet Free verse

Color Me Blue

Color me blue
Like the vast rolling ocean 
I can be most things
Serene and cool, yet, hot! 
Like a blue flame!
So slow to anger, calmly
I can battle many wills
Absorb all colors and shades
I Bend and blend 
Can mix and mingle
Yet, stand firm on my own
Loyal and faithful
Tried and tested you will find
True blue am I
In all seasons and times
With one fatal flaw...
Impatience!
That is me
~*~

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Jimmy Anderson April 20, 2010 at 9:03 AM Hey Mi amor! You wrote about our favorite color! Tu eres mi corazon... xoxox Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown April 15, 2010 at 6:33 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Audrey. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong April 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM This one was one of my favorites Audrey...I loved the 5th line. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Aloha, Connie

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2010 at 2:12 PM Zowie, a kockout, I see you made a win with it. Congratulations!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 9, 2010 at 10:34 AM You sure got blue down to pat here, Audrey! Congrats on your win! :)

Joyce Johnson April 8, 2010 at 7:46 AM you made a very good case for blue. Congratulations. Joyce

Brian Strand April 8, 2010 at 12:44 AM Congrats on your success Audrey.Rgds Brian

Dr.Ram Mehta April 8, 2010 at 12:25 AM It's a well penned poem. Congrats

John Freeman April 7, 2010 at 6:10 PM Congratulations on your place Audrey, on your well deserving poem. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2010 at 3:25 PM What a surprise that we chose the same title for our poems, Audrey. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser April 7, 2010 at 2:48 PM Audrey, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2010 at 2:19 PM Congrats Audrey on your HM in my crayon contest.. a wonderful poem and honor for u and thankxxx for supporting my first contest...luv.. Linda-Marie ...BBF to BBF..

Samuel Brooks April 7, 2010 at 11:31 AM Beautiful write. Absolutely love this poem!

Robert A. Dufresne April 6, 2010 at 5:11 PM Aye 'n be gosh an' by gory ! A Lassie that be knowin' her true self ! Tis a rare treasure indeed me mates! Aye! :) Cool color poem, Audrey.-Robert

Charmaine Chircop April 5, 2010 at 2:32 PM Very Very beautiful..wonderful description for the Color blue..Charma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 5, 2010 at 9:11 AM Interesting write, revealing much about who Audrey is. :) Very nice. Thanks for sharing and thank you for great comments on mine always. Best wishes, Caroline.

Constance La France April 4, 2010 at 6:58 PM You make blue so wonderful... now, your assignment in my contest is .. helplessness... and by the way, my poem, My Pet Dragon, Fang, is my imagination gone wild, and my ongoing attempts at writing children stories.. Love Contance

James Fraser April 3, 2010 at 6:42 PM Super little piece Audrey, nice read > and yes this Highlander is still up and writing, listening to Porcupine Tree with a few Jack Daniels >> taking notes on tomorrows writes >> James,x