Mitch White Poet Rhyme

Color Blind

My first crush seemed like a box of Crayons
Hot Magenta was tugging on her nylons

She dyed her hair like the Florida Sunrise
Her Cool And Crazy words just mesmerize

Cotton Candy eye shadow with every blink
She kissed Wild Strawberry that tattooed my cheek

Her Midnight Blue eyes, that just sparkled within
That Glossy Grape dress, gripped her like sharkskin

We shared a drink, it was called Lemon Lime Zing
This long story short, Atomic Tangerine

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Lori Phipps April 11, 2010 at 4:53 PM This is my favorite Mitch. Well done!

John Freeman April 10, 2010 at 8:58 PM Good job on this one , My Man. I was a bit color blind after I wrote my poem for this contest. Agape, Moses

Connie Marcum Wong April 9, 2010 at 6:26 PM It is this poem that is mesmerizing Mitch. You write with words that capture attention and inspire! I loved this and will put it in my fav's. Perfect ending too! Aloha, Connie

Doris Culverhouse April 9, 2010 at 4:10 AM another great one

James Fraser April 7, 2010 at 2:15 PM Rainbow rising poem Mitch, its pretty darned kool. Good luck in the contest >> James

Jimmy Anderson April 6, 2010 at 5:02 PM Hey Mitch, Thnx for always reading and leaving comments on my writes...it means a whole lot to me...truly appreciated..later, Jimmy

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2010 at 9:35 AM Got a poem about color blind. Very diffrent. Like your side of the story.

Jeralynn Clark April 5, 2010 at 7:25 PM What a colorful romantic tryst!!! Very Clever Mitch!! Thanks for your kin comments and yes I still have the pic! If I could post it here I would! Jeralynn

Robert A. Dufresne April 5, 2010 at 2:00 PM Whew! Sizzling, Mitch! This one of yours got me going a hundred and five my own self! Hot write. Don't know for what contest but looks like a winner to me.- Robert

Cecil Hickman April 4, 2010 at 9:15 PM a great write for the contest,,and I wish you all the best,,,very beautiful flowing lines with powerful descriptions,,and Thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Gareth James April 4, 2010 at 1:04 PM Great poem Mitch. "She kissed Wild Strawberry....Lovely!! Favourate line

Brian Strand April 4, 2010 at 8:18 AM Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Mitch.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2010 at 7:48 AM May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Mitch. Love Carol and Family

Sara Kendrick April 4, 2010 at 5:19 AM Great color write.....That must have been a very interesting person that first crush..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Marty Owens April 3, 2010 at 9:38 PM Very nice description of these colors...love that Grape dress...lol...enjoyed...Marty

Constance La France April 3, 2010 at 8:23 PM I love your description of those colors, you just bring them to life.. wonderful.. love Constance

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2010 at 7:30 PM Hey sounds like a contest entry colored outside the box! This is really nicely done, mitch. So how old were you to be crushing your very first time on someone like THAT? LUv,Andrea

Daniel Cheeseman April 3, 2010 at 4:07 PM Explosive mixture Mitch regards Daniel

Jimmy Anderson April 3, 2010 at 3:13 PM Hey Mitch, Thnx for reading my piece and leaving your comments...I appreciate it. I am asking Audrey to leave this comment on my behalf..... Jimmy

Skat A April 3, 2010 at 11:33 AM Nice story . Very charming . Enjoyed . have yourself a nice easter.

Charmaine Chircop April 3, 2010 at 6:56 AM A beautiful..story..spicy..and sweet..Charma:)

Susan Palli April 3, 2010 at 6:22 AM So colorful!