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Color Blind

My first crush seemed like a box of Crayons Hot Magenta was tugging on her nylons She dyed her hair like the Florida Sunrise Her Cool And Crazy words just mesmerize Cotton Candy eye shadow with every blink She kissed Wild Strawberry that tattooed my cheek Her Midnight Blue eyes, that just sparkled within That Glossy Grape dress, gripped her like sharkskin We shared a drink, it was called Lemon Lime Zing This long story short, Atomic Tangerine

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Lori Phipps

Date: 4/11/2010 4:53:00 PM

This is my favorite Mitch. Well done!

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 8:58:00 PM

Good job on this one , My Man. I was a bit color blind after I wrote my poem for this contest. Agape, Moses

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2010 6:26:00 PM

It is this poem that is mesmerizing Mitch. You write with words that capture attention and inspire! I loved this and will put it in my fav's. Perfect ending too! Aloha, Connie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 4:10:00 AM

another great one

James Fraser

Date: 4/7/2010 2:15:00 PM

Rainbow rising poem Mitch, its pretty darned kool. Good luck in the contest >> James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/6/2010 5:02:00 PM

Hey Mitch, Thnx for always reading and leaving comments on my writes...it means a whole lot to me...truly appreciated..later, Jimmy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2010 9:35:00 AM

Got a poem about color blind. Very diffrent. Like your side of the story.

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 4/5/2010 7:25:00 PM

What a colorful romantic tryst!!! Very Clever Mitch!! Thanks for your kin comments and yes I still have the pic! If I could post it here I would! Jeralynn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/5/2010 2:00:00 PM

Whew! Sizzling, Mitch! This one of yours got me going a hundred and five my own self! Hot write. Don't know for what contest but looks like a winner to me.- Robert

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/4/2010 9:15:00 PM

a great write for the contest,,and I wish you all the best,,,very beautiful flowing lines with powerful descriptions,,and Thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Gareth James

Date: 4/4/2010 1:04:00 PM

Great poem Mitch. "She kissed Wild Strawberry....Lovely!! Favourate line

Brian Strand

Date: 4/4/2010 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Mitch.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2010 7:48:00 AM

May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Mitch. Love Carol and Family

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2010 5:19:00 AM

Great color write.....That must have been a very interesting person that first crush..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Marty Owens

Date: 4/3/2010 9:38:00 PM

Very nice description of these colors...love that Grape dress...lol...enjoyed...Marty

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2010 8:23:00 PM

I love your description of those colors, you just bring them to life.. wonderful.. love Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2010 7:30:00 PM

Hey sounds like a contest entry colored outside the box! This is really nicely done, mitch. So how old were you to be crushing your very first time on someone like THAT? LUv,Andrea

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 4/3/2010 4:07:00 PM

Explosive mixture Mitch regards Daniel

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/3/2010 3:13:00 PM

Hey Mitch, Thnx for reading my piece and leaving your comments...I appreciate it. I am asking Audrey to leave this comment on my behalf..... Jimmy