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I felt the conflict of that summer breeze yearning, my cute friend hummed her graceful song reclining under verdant willow trees. College would soon begin, what could go wrong as I leafed through my literature book to get the feel where emotions belong. I sang a love song to conquer her look, yet sensing in me some quivering throes Left her to cool her feet in the small brook. Then her boyfriend came and hugged her so close, I felt forsaken with too many woes.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 8/23/2022 3:57:00 AM

Oh Victor. Hi. Always are you poetic. Always can you tell a story and draw us all into the scene with you. Truly. Thank you for sharing your work. Have a beautiful and peaceful afternoon. Love and Blessings and and always. It was an honor turning to your page Victor.

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2022 6:11:00 PM

A melancholy verse, A love song turning to heartbreak Nicely penned Victor

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/3/2022 4:26:00 PM

Oh dear. So sad, but a door of opportunity as well Victor! Linda

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/2/2022 11:06:00 AM

Oh dear Victor...your poem did left me laughing aloud...coz I can relate to that. Enjoyed it.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/2/2022 9:56:00 AM

A love that was never meant to be...Delice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2022 9:17:00 AM

Ahh!! It is better to have loved and lost than to never loved at all, so they say. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visit to my page with congrats on my upcoming anniversary is appreciated. Sara

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/2/2022 6:11:00 AM

Loved the twist... So beautifully written...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/1/2022 7:21:00 PM

Great emotion…a longing…a jealousy! Hugs, my friend ~ Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2022 8:51:00 AM

Those kind of memories of young Love stay with you forever. You have expressed the heartache of young unrequited love so beautifully in your poem Victor. Blessings xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 8/1/2022 8:36:00 AM

awe, that's someone's bad luck. :) She is already taken. you are so great in setting up a scene. Great verse. Many blessings and hugs my friend

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/31/2022 4:16:00 PM

Sorry, my dear friend... better time next time.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/31/2022 2:49:00 PM

Victor this sounds too familiar. Just when you think you have met the girl of your dreams you realize she is taken. Well written and it brought back some memories Sooner or later though it all works out, and you end up with the girl. Hope you are doing well my friend...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/31/2022 10:26:00 AM

Ah, but at least you had a look look , nicely penned dear Victor, wishing you love in all forms, :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/31/2022 10:04:00 AM

Young romance and keen disappointment are well conveyed in this skillfully written poem. So sad when love isn't returned. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/31/2022 8:53:00 AM

Victor, your words manage to be both romantic and heartbreaking at the same time. The story takes a tragic turn towards the conclusion, which is effectively communicated.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/31/2022 8:52:00 AM

Ah Victor~your words bring the youthful experiences of life ~ memories that bring sadness to what was hopeful. :)Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/31/2022 5:58:00 AM

Romantic and poignant at the same time, Victor. Emotions well conveyed with a sad turn in the ending.

Valsa George

Date: 7/31/2022 2:27:00 AM

Hi Victor, I feel sorry for you ! I wish I could see the emotions that fleeted past your face at that moment ! This made me recall my college days !

Deb M

Date: 7/31/2022 2:10:00 AM

Ohh Victor you didn’t get the girl….shame haha! Lovely poem again Mr Romance! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/31/2022 2:08:00 AM

Sometimes we expect a friendship to be something more and we feel rejected when we realise that that's what it was, a friendship. Tom