'collapsing Walls'
He walked away with a smile on his face
The only sign of the break up were her tears
He had it all planned at his pace
It was the realism of her biggest fear
The only sign of the break up were her tears
Piece by piece the wall collapsed
It was the realism of her biggest fear
Once again her heart enclosed
Piece by piece the wall collapsed
He had it all planned at his pace
Once again her heart enclosed;
He walked away with a smile on his face
*my first time trying a Pantoum after being challenged..
Hopefully it is up to standard :D*
Thanks for the gauntlet Taz :)
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Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011
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