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Hillsides shimmer in summer's golden fire as marmalade sun dawns on poppied slopes. I run with Monarch butterflies higher barefoot in honey with tangerine hopes. I hear the butter chirp of a warbler's song and smile at God's creative citrine zest. While I inhale the gold-coined sun, I long for the Monarch's dappled orange vest-- If only I could shed my morose shades and pluck the redly poppies off his grave; I could be one with this saffron parade, embrace euphoria, live the colors I crave. Hillsides of valor: once I held his quest. Now I turn to ruby poppies and I scorn, but at myself or all in us that's best. I cannot change the past nor can I mourn a past I cannot change. But on this hill I feel the poppies in their sherbert folds; they lilt like orange butterflies and fill life with sunrise, the beauty Monarchs hold. 7/5/17

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Date: 11/15/2017 7:37:00 PM
This is beautiful imagery and a wonderful use of color, but what can you expect when you're writing with a Rose. A great write for both of you.
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:38:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/15/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, AL!
Date: 11/15/2017 1:19:00 PM
Congrats you two...sad Vie is off to other pastures...great write
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/15/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, Tim, good to hear from you! Yes, too bad about Vie.
Date: 11/15/2017 11:22:00 AM
Dale I'm so glad you've added Vienna's name now the contest has finally been judged. I absolutely adore this poem and am adding it to my faves:-) I had to award a first as Vienna's poem was on the original list I printed out and when i came to judge the poem was gone:-) many many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/15/2017 11:45:00 AM
Jan, I can't thank you enough for acknowledging our poem! I though I read that Vienna had deleted all her work.
Date: 7/6/2017 9:25:00 AM
I love the imagery in this collaboration, Dale and Rosie:) Good luck!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 7/6/2017 8:07:00 AM
Fantastic poem, you two :) The imagery is wonderful. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:58:00 AM
A lovely poem by both of you.
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Date: 7/5/2017 9:16:00 PM
This is just beautiful Dale and Rose...I really liked the "barefoot in honey with tangerine hopes" line...Gl in the contest...
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Date: 7/5/2017 12:08:00 PM
Just read this on MR's page, congratulations on a brilliant effort...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 7/5/2017 11:56:00 AM
What a beautiful collaboration this is. These lines are amazing! Very well done to both of you!! I enjoyed this so much :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thanks very much, Heidi. I appreciate it.
Date: 7/5/2017 11:51:00 AM
What a remarkable creation you and Vie have crafted...love the splashes of color throughout.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. Great to hear from you!
Date: 7/5/2017 11:42:00 AM
Dale, this was wonderful, a beautifully crafted collaboration that speaks to me. The colors, the emotions, the warmth and the beauty all blend so well together as well the hint of sadness and longing. Once I realized who the other poet was, I understand how this could be. You are both very talented poets. A masterful piece of writing to both of you.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Chris. I really mean that.

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