Cold Witch Kiss

`blue northern `horses energized cold witch kiss (3/5/3 ` For Contest: Haiku Your Way Sponsor: Charles Henderson

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 3:14:00 PM

You had me smiling with this poem, John. I'm assuming the "blue northern" is a chilling wind. Great title! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 1/29/2011 5:46:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my blog today, John, I love your Haiku, I have had three horses in my life, so far, and they sure do love that cold wind, they just leap and spin in joy~~

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/27/2011 11:13:00 PM

This is so realistic John, i'm almost there. Just love this. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 8:46:00 PM

thanks for your explanations for me on this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2011 3:56:00 PM

Do you call a cold wind a "blue?" This is interesting and an apt portrayal of a really cold winter. I sense a wind in this poem! Good luck in the contest, john. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 6:58:00 PM

hahahah. very very amusing and humorous haiku, John. I dont think you need luck for such a wonderful haiku