Cold Springs

I was an army-brat town boy of ten when we moved to the country. I recall arriving in a village called Cold Springs. My dad purchased a century-old house with five and a half acres of farmland. But it had no running water, no bathroom, and no furnace. An outhouse was attached to a barn some distance from the house. And a rusty outside pump was our only means of water. For heat, it had a pot-bellied iron stove; that we had to feed all day and all night. It felt spooky and haunted. At first, I hated it! At night, I'd hear groans and squeaks that invaded my dreams. But Dad dug a well, painted the outsides, had copper plumbing installed, put in a septic tank, built a bathroom, and added a furnace, turning that house into a home, I've learned to love.
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Kauffman Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Sounds like your old house had great bones and with a lot of TLC a house became a family home. Congratulations on your win Emile!
Pinet Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Messina Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 4:01 AM
It's like the story of the Ugly Duckling. A lovely write, Emile. Congratulations on your winning placement. Hope all is well my friend.. Charlie
Mitra Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Your Dad indeed a Hero who made a house a home....Congrats on your win :)
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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