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I was an army-brat town boy of ten when we moved to the country. I recall arriving in a village called Cold Springs. My dad bought a century-old house that came with five and a half acres. But, it had no running water, no sewage, no bathroom, and no furnace. There was an outhouse attached to a barn, some distance from the house. And a rusty outside pump was our only means of water. For heat, it had a pot-bellied iron stove that we had to feed all day and all night. It felt spooky and haunted. And at first, I hated it! At night I'd hear groans and squeaks that invaded my dreams. But, dad dug a well, put paint on the walls, put in copper plumping, put in a septic tank, put in a bathroom, put in a furnace, and made that house our home. (Free Verse) 12/10/2020 STORY FROM YOUR CHILDHOOD Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 12/11/2020 9:19:00 PM
Sounds like your old house had great bones and with a lot of TLC a house became a family home. Congratulations on your win Emile!
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Date: 12/12/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/11/2020 12:04:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/11/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/11/2020 4:01:00 AM
It's like the story of the Ugly Duckling. A lovely write, Emile. Congratulations on your winning placement. Hope all is well my friend.. Charlie
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Date: 12/10/2020 9:14:00 PM
Your Dad indeed a Hero who made a house a home....Congrats on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/11/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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