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Cold Measurements

Do not think there is a day I do not want Or a week, or even a year I repulse Do not think I do rebuff Any part that is you If there is something I abhor it is the distance... the distance that you put between us In miles, lightyears and the length Of your arm In cold measurements of two cups water, three cups ice, you dose our lives You dispense your time in small pills The wild that we were so long ago Turned tame and subdued A gilded cage with open door Do not think there is a day I do not miss Who we once were. I reject Who we are now. I set you free. *** March 24, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 3/29/2017 12:47:00 AM
Wow Darren. Powerful writing, the last verse expressive of great strength. Parting is painful and sad, it's when people stay that is so tragic. I love this,.a fave, 7+ lynn xxx
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Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Lynn, first time in days I can reply. Thanks for fav and 7
Date: 3/25/2017 7:12:00 PM
You're a wise man, Darren. This happens, sometimes.
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Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 12:10:00 AM
It does.. and it is painful
Date: 3/25/2017 6:07:00 PM
What powerful imagery. I particularly like the last 3 stanzas because they apply to so many relationships that have gone wrong. Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 12:01:00 AM
Hello Anne-Marie, it is absolutely true :)
Date: 3/25/2017 10:02:00 AM
Very deep sentiments so poetically treated ... Nice ...
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Date: 3/25/2017 9:26:00 AM
In cold measurement..Love the analogy...Great poem
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Tim :)
Date: 3/25/2017 8:23:00 AM
Wow. Excellent Darren. This is well written with a powerful ending :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 8:42:00 AM
Heidi, thank you :)
Date: 3/25/2017 8:19:00 AM
Wow. 7. Wow Darren, so effectively penned I am rendered speechless xomo
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, also for the 7 :)
Date: 3/25/2017 8:09:00 AM
Oh, Duir! Tell me it's not true!
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Date: 3/25/2017 8:42:00 AM
Good to know! /|\
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Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 8:40:00 AM
It's NOT TRUE!!! Dear friend, not everything I write is about current events. This did happen but not between Jason and I. He and I are good, I love him Budgie, no worries :)

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